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Comment from schatzling
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What an excellent piece of writing I just read. Wow. I enjoyed it very much. It flows quite well and definitely goes with what you are exploring...the defining of science and the God creation facts. I am truly honored you selected my art works to accompany your writing thank you so very much

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 19-Feb-2018
    No it is I whom am grateful. Glad aspects presented in this write was found pleasing. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
Comment from Pantygynt
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The ancient Greeks were a strange mix of great sagacity, Plato, Socrates, on the one hand and belief in all this baloneyh on the other. In truth a strange mixture. I like the idea behind this poem, beautiful and beguiling the diamond could well have been to plaything of Hades.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
    Glad aspects in this work was found to be pleasing and captivating in some form of interest. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed views.
Comment from RoostyNester
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Very nice "Love of Diamonds" poem. Well done in style and verse, with well chosen words to express your message to the reader. We are, where are minds are. If we claim our treasures here on earth...then that's the only treasures we will ever have. Nice.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
    So true as stated our treasures are within our hearts desires. Jesus said give to Caesar that which is his and give unto God that which is His. Interesting tanglement of concepts. One of a temporary condition while the other defines ourselves in the eternal scheme.
Comment from liz burgoyne
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I love the challenge of a Poem I don't quite understand. At first it spoke of a diamond. Then I realized the diamond could be a person. Now I'm wondering if it's
a lost soul? Thanks for giving me something to think about!

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
    Yes they are lost souls, further revisions might help this write comprehension. You at least captured the intent behind this work which to me is half the battle. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating views.
Comment from Heather Knight
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This is a vey beautiful poem.
I like the contrast between the light of the diamond (that you describe perfectly) and the darkness Hades represents.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
    I never considered those aspects of this write, but clearly perceived those factors about its structuring now. Thanking you for generous rate and insights about this effort.
Comment from William Ross
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a good free verse on Hades who lusts after or seeks the gem stones. a good informative piece for them who believe. Nicely done. have a good day.

 Comment Written 06-Aug-2016

reply by the author on 07-Aug-2016
    Glad this write had lessen pits making read difficult. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Beverly Botelho
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Beautiful rendition: it brought to mind the movie, "Blood Diamond." I also couldn't help but make a comparison of the image of how a beautiful woman, or any charismatic person, could fit the description that you draw. No technical errors. Well done.

 Comment Written 23-May-2016

reply by the author on 23-May-2016
    I hope you right about errors. Again glad you found interests in this write. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
reply by Beverly Botelho on 25-May-2016
    Keep writing!
Comment from Gert sherwood
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hello TPac I don't know much about Hades' treasures of jewels
But I will say he has lust for only himself the beauty of jewels.

Gert

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Caprured souls are Hades' delights: his showcase. Glad you found interests in this write. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from writeapoem
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Quite an interesting poem on Hades and the ruler and jeweler of the underworld. His priceless jewels are fools who deny God the bible says it so. Psalms 14: 1. Your reliance on science the book that describes Gods creation is good. The image sets the human mind and the reflection taken in by the keen eye.

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    I feel good, intent of my message felt to a degree. Thanking you for generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
reply by writeapoem on 25-May-2016
    Your very welcome
Comment from Eric1
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Hi TPAC, beautifully written free verse poem about the fascinating Hades, I have always taken an interest in Greek Mythology so I really enjoyed this wonderfully descriptive trip with you my friend.

 Comment Written 22-May-2016

reply by the author on 25-May-2016
    Myths has truth in facts, I too: like them. Thanking you for generous rate and captivating views about this write.