Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "A Cheater's Winning Sonnet"A collection of sonnets
25 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
haha good one and wow on the picture great offering mate. No spags I don't think. Trying to get back to my book Sigh! Thanks again.
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haha good one and wow on the picture great offering mate. No spags I don't think. Trying to get back to my book Sigh! Thanks again.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2014
Comment from Darkhorse555
NOW READING this mikey dispenser of venom towards any who cheat i know the feeling on this subject wonderful lighting piece smiling pal beautifully penned
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NOW READING this mikey dispenser of venom towards any who cheat i know the feeling on this subject wonderful lighting piece smiling pal beautifully penned
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from ann marie mazz
hello mikey
I hope this day finds you well
thank you so much for the laugh and smile
it was the title that caught my eye to turn the page
your words kept my attention
you address an issue with humor and dignity as well
you are a riot
the presentation is marvelous
the image is both fabulous and perfect
thank you for sharing your talent
this was fun to read
ann marie
w e l l
d o n e
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hello mikey
I hope this day finds you well
thank you so much for the laugh and smile
it was the title that caught my eye to turn the page
your words kept my attention
you address an issue with humor and dignity as well
you are a riot
the presentation is marvelous
the image is both fabulous and perfect
thank you for sharing your talent
this was fun to read
ann marie
w e l l
d o n e
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from Tatarka2
Although this isn't my favorite of your poems, it's still lyrical, funny, and sends an important message. In short, it's still better than most of the poetry I read here. I didn't like the first stanza, though. It reads like a run-on sentence to me, and I found it difficult to understand.
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Although this isn't my favorite of your poems, it's still lyrical, funny, and sends an important message. In short, it's still better than most of the poetry I read here. I didn't like the first stanza, though. It reads like a run-on sentence to me, and I found it difficult to understand.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from Sasha
Take everything Dean Kuch said in his review and pretend I said it first. I do find it amazing that a poem or story can get 50 terrific reviews but only 2 or 3 votes in the contest...just don't make sense to me. Great work with this one, you clearly had as much fun writing it as I did reading it.
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Take everything Dean Kuch said in his review and pretend I said it first. I do find it amazing that a poem or story can get 50 terrific reviews but only 2 or 3 votes in the contest...just don't make sense to me. Great work with this one, you clearly had as much fun writing it as I did reading it.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very interesting the way each line begins with a D-word. Was that part of the contest rules? I love the very last line ... LOL. I don't suppose it matters much that you left the 's off SONNET'S POOR FORM. :)
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Very interesting the way each line begins with a D-word. Was that part of the contest rules? I love the very last line ... LOL. I don't suppose it matters much that you left the 's off SONNET'S POOR FORM. :)
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah-hah, well, Mikey, I ain't gonna discredit this sonnet in the least. Ya wanna know why? Because it's true, that's why, LOL.
I never ceases to amaze me how you can get 50+ positive reviews, and just six votes for the same damn poem (even less for a story!) in a contest. How the F@&K does that happen? It is clearly listed as a "CONTEST ENTRY", right? Does nobody read that part?
Oh sh!t, I just don't get it.
Very funny, Mikey. I'm still laughing, heh-heh...
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Hah-hah, well, Mikey, I ain't gonna discredit this sonnet in the least. Ya wanna know why? Because it's true, that's why, LOL.
I never ceases to amaze me how you can get 50+ positive reviews, and just six votes for the same damn poem (even less for a story!) in a contest. How the F@&K does that happen? It is clearly listed as a "CONTEST ENTRY", right? Does nobody read that part?
Oh sh!t, I just don't get it.
Very funny, Mikey. I'm still laughing, heh-heh...
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, then you have escaped the grime of pride and faux adulation. I wonder just how true this may be in certain circumstances. Great tongue-in-cheek humor. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, then you have escaped the grime of pride and faux adulation. I wonder just how true this may be in certain circumstances. Great tongue-in-cheek humor. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 13-Sep-2014
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, some times it pays to know someone....ever heard that before...LOL...along time ago I was told they were fixed...but I have seen good ones win too!!! But not often...and great write you...very well thought of...and so be thought about...Luff Linda xxoo
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HI Michael, some times it pays to know someone....ever heard that before...LOL...along time ago I was told they were fixed...but I have seen good ones win too!!! But not often...and great write you...very well thought of...and so be thought about...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
Comment from Loren (7)
Dis is really dddddelightful:) Now for da content. Loved the last line in the 3rd stanza and the closing couplet reminds me why I don't compete. Nice job, Mikey - Loren
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Dis is really dddddelightful:) Now for da content. Loved the last line in the 3rd stanza and the closing couplet reminds me why I don't compete. Nice job, Mikey - Loren
Comment Written 12-Sep-2014
