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Comment from Patty Mazzurco
I have to tell you I believe Carlina & Addie are definite fans now... and they'll be asking me if there is a new story every sleepover now... lol Great story!
'We must think of something, before we go home,(period)
how(How) we will catch him.(?) We know he's alone.'
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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I have to tell you I believe Carlina & Addie are definite fans now... and they'll be asking me if there is a new story every sleepover now... lol Great story!
'We must think of something, before we go home,(period)
how(How) we will catch him.(?) We know he's alone.'
Comment Written 09-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Bless them, I am so pleased they enjoy it! Thank you Patty, that is so nice of you. I will go back and change those bits, thanks for picking it up for me. I shall remember Carlina and Addie! xsx
Comment from Merajul
Its a long for sure butit ends! There lies the main problem -the kids always want to hear what happened next.And then next, afterwards, next..
Another very thrilling one for the kids and this time it kept them glued till the end ..
Excellent!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Its a long for sure butit ends! There lies the main problem -the kids always want to hear what happened next.And then next, afterwards, next..
Another very thrilling one for the kids and this time it kept them glued till the end ..
Excellent!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you so very much Merajul! I hope Sayem enjoyed it too! I will be getting the illustration for that story soon, I have asked for one of the pictures to show Sayem with his trophy! Thank you again, for this lovely review! xsx
Comment from rashi kumar
Children will love it.
The rhyming aabbcc bbccaa- lovely things on- a pleasurable poem/story! Too long but the story had to be concluded with a lesson learnt.
Sandra, I enjoyed reading it.
Take care!
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Children will love it.
The rhyming aabbcc bbccaa- lovely things on- a pleasurable poem/story! Too long but the story had to be concluded with a lesson learnt.
Sandra, I enjoyed reading it.
Take care!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you, Rashi, for your lovely review. And thank you for reading it, I put a warning on it that it was long! I can't seem to stop when I get started!!! Thank you again. xsx
Comment from Jane Johnson
Absolutely terrific! I can do this, but I just don't know where you get that imagination?! Again, what a great children's book this would be! Great rhyme. Good steady flow of words. Cute story. I loudly applaud you! You're kind of writing and rhyming is what keep me interested in poetry and you do it so wonderfully! Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Absolutely terrific! I can do this, but I just don't know where you get that imagination?! Again, what a great children's book this would be! Great rhyme. Good steady flow of words. Cute story. I loudly applaud you! You're kind of writing and rhyming is what keep me interested in poetry and you do it so wonderfully! Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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What an amazing review!! You are so kind, Jane, thank you so very, very much! And I thank you for giving this story the 6 stars, as I said, an amazing review and I thank you again! Sandra.
Comment from Barlock
Ha-ha-ha! LOL
That is a really good story (excuse me - poem).
Vicky the Vole, Timmy and Tommy, Millie the Mole, Cyril the Squirrel, Reggie the Rat, Whiffy the Weasel.
Very clever!
I enjoied reading your poem, Sandra. It was very refreshing - you even managed to use all right punctuation.
Well done.
Cheers,
JB
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Ha-ha-ha! LOL
That is a really good story (excuse me - poem).
Vicky the Vole, Timmy and Tommy, Millie the Mole, Cyril the Squirrel, Reggie the Rat, Whiffy the Weasel.
Very clever!
I enjoied reading your poem, Sandra. It was very refreshing - you even managed to use all right punctuation.
Well done.
Cheers,
JB
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you so much for this lovely review, JB, I am so pleased you enjoyed it!! Sandra.x
Comment from RaymondJohn
Not long at all. It's a delight from beginning to end. It reminds me of the Wind in the Willows. Extremely fine characterization. The rhyme is fantastic, and I can't imagine a more compelling story. Huzzah! Best wishes. Ray.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Not long at all. It's a delight from beginning to end. It reminds me of the Wind in the Willows. Extremely fine characterization. The rhyme is fantastic, and I can't imagine a more compelling story. Huzzah! Best wishes. Ray.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Thank you so very much. Ray! What a really lovely review! Thank you, and a big thank you for giving my story those 6 stars, I am so very pleased you enjoyed it, thank you! Sandra.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This was a fun read and exactly the length it needed to be. I did find one bit of spag:
his eyes filled with sadness; so glum was his stare.
That's an incorrect use of the semi-colon. Change to a comma.
Here's a good explanation of when to use that nasty mark:
http://www.getitwriteonline.com/archive/091701Semicolon.htm
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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This was a fun read and exactly the length it needed to be. I did find one bit of spag:
his eyes filled with sadness; so glum was his stare.
That's an incorrect use of the semi-colon. Change to a comma.
Here's a good explanation of when to use that nasty mark:
http://www.getitwriteonline.com/archive/091701Semicolon.htm
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Thank you for that Phyllis, I always get that little thing wrong.
I will have a look into that site. I'm glad you liked my story and didn't mind the length. I am finding the more I am writing about these little friends the longer the stories are getting! Thank you for the great and informative review, I will change that error now!! xsx
Comment from squid152
I liked the alliteration with: glum was his stare, sort right away, harvesting day, tucked up in bed and stand by his son.-Squid
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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I liked the alliteration with: glum was his stare, sort right away, harvesting day, tucked up in bed and stand by his son.-Squid
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Thank you, Squid! I hope the length wasn't a put off! Thank you for the lovely review! xsx
Comment from TammyGail
I enjoy your long verse and I didn't see any spag Sandra
it was a great read and one for all ages not just the kids:)
loved the closing lines they were great ...thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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I enjoy your long verse and I didn't see any spag Sandra
it was a great read and one for all ages not just the kids:)
loved the closing lines they were great ...thanks for sharing
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Thank you, Tammy, for your lovely review, I'm glad you enjoyed it!! xsx
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
Sandra, love these stories. They are written with such great imagery for the reader to actually see in their minds eyes these little creatures. They standout so well.
This is very well written as it flows easily even with its length. Your rhyme scheme is also very good.
Keep up the great work my friend,,,,,,,Jim xx
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Sandra, love these stories. They are written with such great imagery for the reader to actually see in their minds eyes these little creatures. They standout so well.
This is very well written as it flows easily even with its length. Your rhyme scheme is also very good.
Keep up the great work my friend,,,,,,,Jim xx
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Thank you Jim! Your words really mean such a lot to me, thank you for this lovely review! Sandra. x
