Holiday and Holyday Poetry
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Comment from adewpearl
good use of strong rhyming couplets
good use of assonance in babe in the hay and in sweetly asleep
nice consonance of L sounds in gentle lullaby
and good alliteration in soft sigh
a most thoughtful Christmas poem :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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good use of strong rhyming couplets
good use of assonance in babe in the hay and in sweetly asleep
nice consonance of L sounds in gentle lullaby
and good alliteration in soft sigh
a most thoughtful Christmas poem :-) Brooke
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2011
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Dear Brooke, thank you for your review. Dove
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, dove marie, a great job writing this poem about the star that led the way into bethlehem to see the Savior of our world and the Shepherd of all men.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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this is very well written, dove marie, a great job writing this poem about the star that led the way into bethlehem to see the Savior of our world and the Shepherd of all men.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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Dear sweetwoodjax, thank you for your review about my butterfly love poem and also for this poem. dove
Comment from mumsyone
Another nice Christmas poem about a story that never grows old. I almost used that same artwork for one of my Christmas poems.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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Another nice Christmas poem about a story that never grows old. I almost used that same artwork for one of my Christmas poems.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2011
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Dear mumsyone, thank you for your review. Dove
