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Blue Butterflies

A pi poem.

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Comment from Julie G1
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This verse expresses the magic of the pure delightul wonders of nature that surround us mortals. The poetic message highlights the essence of the habitat and creatures that exist, as well as mankind. The lines flow smoothly, and are well matched by the vivid and thoughtful graphic.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Your really are special thank you so much for stopping by
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Patricia!

This is a beautiful presentation. What are the rules for a Pi Poem?
I have never heard of one.

Your words are lovely.
Thank you for sharing.
Kim

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it very much. A pi poem is a syllable, count poem. It uses the first 14 numbers for the Mathematical word for pi. The syllable count is as follows, 3.1415926535897. The format is called a CADEA meaning that each number has its own letter CADEA would be a 31451. I did not make up the rules for the game, but I sure do enjoy writing this particular format.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Patricia,

This is a beautiful poem about blue butterflies. When I lived in Memphis, TN I used to see a ton of blue butterflies. It was so mesmerizing to see them. It's the first and only time I have ever seen them.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Thank you for your very nice review as much
Comment from Mistydawn
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Butterflies do have a magic all of their own, don't they. It's like they are a wonderous creation all in their little selves. Your poem is beautifully written, descriptive and your image is breathtaking. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and navy such a nice review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Yes, it is magical. Your poem and your artwork set a very special scene for us and puts our hearts in a wonderful. I needed that at this minute. Thank you for answering the call.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Thank you very much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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It really would be a magical place if there really were butterflies in that gorgeous shade of blue! nicely written and beautiful picture. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Your reviews are always appreciated. Thank you so much.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Not sure I have ever seen a blue butterfly in Britain, but I know thy exist. Another magical poem about our fluttering friends Patricia, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for your lovely review I appreciate it very much.
Comment from jim vecchio
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I'm sorry, but I keep repeating myself. I love these poems and the way you embellish your words with the fine illustrations. There isn't much more to say, but I hope you continue this series, as I truly enjoy them.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    Thanks so much for your review appreciated I'm glad you enjoyed these because I will probably do a bunch more.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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I really enjoyed your poem! The way you describe the blue butterflies flying above is so clear. I love how you tie them to God's glory and the beauty of creation. It made me think about how often we overlook such simple wonders. Your words have a peaceful flow. The magic you see in nature is so easy to feel through your writing. It's a gentle reminder of the beauty around us and God's greatness. Keep sharing these lovely thoughts!

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for your very thoughtful review. I appreciate it very much. I enjoy doing this particular format for poetry because it is example of what we can do with just using a few syllables of making a nice flowing work.
Comment from Sally Law
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Beautifully written and illustrated npoem of the rare blue butterfly. God makes such beautiful things, and we are always drawn to praise by His creation. Sending you my best today as always, dear Patricia.
Sal Xoxo

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 Comment Written 03-Apr-2025

reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and maybe such a beautiful review. It is very much appreciated. I wish you a very wonderful weekend.