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Our mistakes

A, nonet

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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It's true what you say here Patricia, if we don't take heed and learn from our mistakes then we will travel the same path again, as history has shown us. Well done, cheers Valda

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for your very kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This nonet, Our Mistakes, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that those who forget the past mistakes are doomed to repeat them again...

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    I am always grateful when I get nicer reviews
Comment from Begin Again
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Oh so very true, Patricia. We all are human and can make errors, but if we do not understand and learn from them, what happens as we do it over and over again? Very well written. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    With gratitude in my heart, I wish to thank you for a very nice review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Learning from our mistakes and forgiving ourselves means we will aso forgive others. None of us are perfect, but repeating a mistake can sometimes be unforgivable, I enjoyed your wise words Patricia, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for taking the time to read review my work I
Comment from tempeste
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Even people like Elon Musk have experienced failure but he learned from his mistakes so the next time he was more prepared.

Mistakes should be like stepping stones which propel us forward.

Who doesn't learn from their mistakes, will not succeed in life.


 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Your reviews are always special. Thank you for this one.
reply by tempeste on 04-Apr-2025
    I appreciate that you enjoy my feedback . 🙂
Comment from lyenochka
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I wish we could personally and as a nation learn from our mistakes. But God is in charge and thankfully, He is a very patient and loving God. He will has covered our mistakes and guides us graciously!

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for making time to read review my work
Comment from ~Dovey
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Hi Patclaw,

Your nonet was a perfect syllable count until the last line, and I'm sure that was on purpose. Have you ever written an Etheree? That is the same style of format, except it is 10 lines - 10 syllables down to one syllable.
Thank you for sharing, this is nicely written.

Kim

 Comment Written 02-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
    Thank you for this wonderful review. Appreciate it very much.
Comment from Mistydawn
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That is a great piece of advice and you're right if we don't learn, we will do it again. Your words of wisdom is great reminder to all of us, and I love how you did the pyramid format on this. Great job.

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for your lovely review. That is great truly enjoyed the peace. When I write things, I write to send a message. I don't write necessary to be overly Poetic. That's one of the reasons I like the pie and stuff because I can give a message with that easier than I can in a story.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Patricia,

This is a great poem and the words ring so true. When we make mistakes we must acknowledge it and hopefully we learn from it so we don't do it again. If we do shame on us.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and being nice
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you for stopping by reading my work and being nice
Comment from evilynne
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You are very right. As your poem says, if we do not learn for our mistakes we are very apt to repeat them. It's best to own up to our mistakes and move on without repeating them. Evi

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025


reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work