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White Chalk Rose

A pi poem.

16 total reviews 
Comment from evilynne
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That is a lovely poem and a beautiful drawing of a rose. Some things in life just need to be saved and preserved as the artist in your poem did with his chalk drawing. Evi

 Comment Written 30-Mar-2025


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    Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This pi poem, White Chalk Road, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that even our simplest works can mean a lot to us for whatever reason. We will try to preserve it somehow.

 Comment Written 29-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    I am always grateful when I get wonderful reviews like this thank you
Comment from Carol Clark2
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The picture of the rose is beautiful! Your words are lovely, also, and it's an interesting idea that an artist would frame his chalk drawing so that it would not be erased. Have a blessed weekend. Carol

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Kirsten Shonle
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I wonder how the frame worked out for him. I'm sure it will likely be ignored and his beautiful drawing will fall to the wayside. There is beautiful imagery in this poem. I enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
    I would imagine that he probably used a glass over the artwork when he framed it. Thank you for your.
Comment from Mistydawn
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That is a beautiful rose. I imagine a lot of work went into it could see why he wouldn't want it erased. Your poem is well written, creates a vivid picture in the reader's mind. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
    Thank you for your time to read and review my
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Patricia,

This is a beautiful poem. The rose is absolutely beautiful and I can understand why the artist wanted to frame it. The picture compliments the poem.

Well done

Cecilia

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


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    I am always grateful when I get nicer reviews from
Comment from nancyjam
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What a beautiful picture, Patricia. I love the story of it, told here in your
lovely pi poem. He was quite an artist. Thanks for sharing this one.
Nancy

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


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    I'm always grateful when I get nice reviews like
Comment from royowen
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I think to paint a perfect picture of anything, even with ythe virtual life of a white rose, and this is a beautiful piece of artistry, no wonder it would be fit to be framed, well done Pat, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
reply by royowen on 29-Mar-2025
    Well done
reply by royowen on 29-Mar-2025
    Well done
Comment from RJ Heritage
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It's incredible hiw real this looks. I cannot count the words or syllables as my vision is tricky today, but I know beauty once I can see it, and your words describe this white as such.
RJ

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    I always appreciate your comments. Thank you so much.
reply by RJ Heritage on 30-Mar-2025
    You're welcome
    RJ
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Chalk drawings don't remain around long enough, that's for sure. Thank you for sharing this beautifully written poem and artworks with us. I enjoyed ooth.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
    Your reviews are always special thank you so much for stopping by