Comment from Karen Cherry

Excellent

This is quite lovely. The picture and colors are very grand.
Your really bring spring to us. Please pass this along. My sister Tammy had her eye surgery, and her second eye is pitching a fit. Please pray for her. Karen

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Prayers for Tammy. Thanks for your feedback.

Comment from Helvi2

Exceptional

Love both your image and poem! You created a beautiful scene with your words that grace the imagination. Love the rhymes and beautiful flow. I especially like your repetition phrase. The imagery is wonderful! Good luck in the contest!
:o) Helvi

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025

Thank you for your read and your encouraging review. The six stars are highly appreciated.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is such a beautiful celebration of spring! I love how you describe the awakening of the earth. I can almost feel the freshness of spring through your words. The way you bid winter goodbye with "adieu, adieu" is so perfect! haha Keep up the wonderful work!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025

Thanks much for the encouraging review.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice repetition poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. You used very good descriptive words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2025

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2025

Thanks much for the encouraging review.