The Shining Pyramid
A concrete (visual) poem2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
I appreciate your taking the time to tell us about the Giza pyramid both in your etheree and your notes. It is fun to think Ra is casting beams of light on this imposing structure. I also like how the shape of your poem mimics a pyramid. Rod
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I appreciate your taking the time to tell us about the Giza pyramid both in your etheree and your notes. It is fun to think Ra is casting beams of light on this imposing structure. I also like how the shape of your poem mimics a pyramid. Rod
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Rod.
Comment from Julie G1
This poem is centred around an original subject. The verse provides clear vivid word pictures to portrays a thoughtful insight into ancient heritage and worship. The poet has chosen beautiful descriptions, well matched by the graphic. An apt response to the format.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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This poem is centred around an original subject. The verse provides clear vivid word pictures to portrays a thoughtful insight into ancient heritage and worship. The poet has chosen beautiful descriptions, well matched by the graphic. An apt response to the format.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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Many thanks, Julie.
