The Sailor's Bell
mono rhyme contest5 total reviews
Comment from royowen
You've written and excellent mono rhyme for this contest, sometimes there are only a few to choose from, but you've chosen a good one with ELL as your chosen one, good job, an excellent job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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You've written and excellent mono rhyme for this contest, sometimes there are only a few to choose from, but you've chosen a good one with ELL as your chosen one, good job, an excellent job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Comment from Nicki.B
This is just beautiful. I love what you did here in your monorhyme poem! What an interesting technique, I think I've seen it before but I have yet to try one!
I love the scenes you have created here, the view of the charming well, the feeling of making that wish you just hope will come true, the wish of a sailor echoing. This is beautiful, well done.
Good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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This is just beautiful. I love what you did here in your monorhyme poem! What an interesting technique, I think I've seen it before but I have yet to try one!
I love the scenes you have created here, the view of the charming well, the feeling of making that wish you just hope will come true, the wish of a sailor echoing. This is beautiful, well done.
Good luck with the contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent mknorhyme that uses the sound ell. You creatively followed the wishing well theme. I happen to love wishing wells. We has one in our old yard and your poem reminds me to buy one for our new yard. ;)
There is something magical about wishing wells and you successfully captured that, too. The sailor could have beeb my dad who was a sailor who also had a wishing well in his garden. Well done!
Peace & blessings,
Alex
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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent mknorhyme that uses the sound ell. You creatively followed the wishing well theme. I happen to love wishing wells. We has one in our old yard and your poem reminds me to buy one for our new yard. ;)
There is something magical about wishing wells and you successfully captured that, too. The sailor could have beeb my dad who was a sailor who also had a wishing well in his garden. Well done!
Peace & blessings,
Alex
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Possibly (use as if to...
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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You're welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Make a wish in this wishing well and hope for the best. I enjoyed the rhymes and sentiment and wish you luck with the contest here, a fine post full of hope, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Make a wish in this wishing well and hope for the best. I enjoyed the rhymes and sentiment and wish you luck with the contest here, a fine post full of hope, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem has an almost mystical feel to it! I love how the rhyme flows so naturally. The line about the Captain ringing his bell really stands out - it's such a great way to end the poem. Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Your poem has an almost mystical feel to it! I love how the rhyme flows so naturally. The line about the Captain ringing his bell really stands out - it's such a great way to end the poem. Great job!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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