When the Mirror Fails
A humorous poem.6 total reviews
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your humorous mono rhyme entry. yeah I get it, mirrors can be the worst. You made a good choice, go back to bed and turn out the light!Very funny. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed your humorous mono rhyme entry. yeah I get it, mirrors can be the worst. You made a good choice, go back to bed and turn out the light!Very funny. Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Nancy! I appreciate your kind review and am glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Aiona
What a cute poem! It fits the monorhyme prompt as every single line rhymes at the end. My favorite line was "My hair seemed styled by dynamite;" because I can totally relate to that.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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What a cute poem! It fits the monorhyme prompt as every single line rhymes at the end. My favorite line was "My hair seemed styled by dynamite;" because I can totally relate to that.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thanks for the kind review! The dynamite is my personal favorite styling device :-) . So glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem had me smiling the whole way through! The lighthearted tone made it such a fun read. I loved when you wrote about looking in the mirror and deciding sometimes it's just better to go back to bed!
Great job!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Your poem had me smiling the whole way through! The lighthearted tone made it such a fun read. I loved when you wrote about looking in the mirror and deciding sometimes it's just better to go back to bed!
Great job!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the kind review! I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry in the Monorhyme poem contest. The end rhymes are spot-on and read smoothly. The humor is creatively infused throughout the poem from the first line to the last. Your skill for crafting simple but hilarious poetic verse restricted by your chosen end rhyme is brilliant.'
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent entry in the Monorhyme poem contest. The end rhymes are spot-on and read smoothly. The humor is creatively infused throughout the poem from the first line to the last. Your skill for crafting simple but hilarious poetic verse restricted by your chosen end rhyme is brilliant.'
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Eugene! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Yolanda King
Oh, this is good! It rhymes well and it's absolutely relatable. The solution is perfect.
I sometimes feel that way when I look into airport mirrors. The lighting there doesn't make anyone look attractive. My solution is to simply not look, or that inside the airport it's all fake anyway so the image looking at my isn't really me.
In your poem I particularly like the line My hair seemed styled by dynamite; That actually made me laugh out loud.
I very much enjoyed your poem. Thank you!
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Oh, this is good! It rhymes well and it's absolutely relatable. The solution is perfect.
I sometimes feel that way when I look into airport mirrors. The lighting there doesn't make anyone look attractive. My solution is to simply not look, or that inside the airport it's all fake anyway so the image looking at my isn't really me.
In your poem I particularly like the line My hair seemed styled by dynamite; That actually made me laugh out loud.
I very much enjoyed your poem. Thank you!
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the kind review, too.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here with this reflective poem and I loved the line:
(I'd be thinner if I could gain some height)
Loved the rhymes, humour and sentiment here, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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You made me smile here with this reflective poem and I loved the line:
(I'd be thinner if I could gain some height)
Loved the rhymes, humour and sentiment here, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thanks, Dolly! You are always so kind with your reviews.
