My Love for You
A free verse poem15 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
A marvelous love story you have penned!
I really like your closing for this free verse. Of course, a tweak, here and there, may still be warranted with those we love. LOL
Font choice and illustration are perfect matches for your poem.
Mark
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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A marvelous love story you have penned!
I really like your closing for this free verse. Of course, a tweak, here and there, may still be warranted with those we love. LOL
Font choice and illustration are perfect matches for your poem.
Mark
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Mark, for your wonderful and encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
There is a feeling of love in your words. Love the verse that mentions wild horses, a great image to express love. You have a smooth poetic flow of words and a light feel that brings forth romance.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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There is a feeling of love in your words. Love the verse that mentions wild horses, a great image to express love. You have a smooth poetic flow of words and a light feel that brings forth romance.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
There's one thing about a love that never really needs refreshing and reviving, the reasons that once where, have not changed thought the years have flown, beautifully written Kahpot, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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There's one thing about a love that never really needs refreshing and reviving, the reasons that once where, have not changed thought the years have flown, beautifully written Kahpot, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Roy, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpo
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Most welcome
Comment from evilynne
That is a wonderfully romantic love poem. Love sure does have many ups and downs, but it is none the less a great experience for those who embark on it. Your poem is quite well written. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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That is a wonderfully romantic love poem. Love sure does have many ups and downs, but it is none the less a great experience for those who embark on it. Your poem is quite well written. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you so very much, Evi, for your wonderful comments, and six stars, and yes, love can be difficult, but it is worth the fight, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Any woman would be thrilled to receive this poem. It is beautifully written and has a lot of deep sentiment. Continue writing like this and you'll get a reputation for being a lady killer.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Any woman would be thrilled to receive this poem. It is beautifully written and has a lot of deep sentiment. Continue writing like this and you'll get a reputation for being a lady killer.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, kahpot.
-I agree with the message in the notes.
-A well written poem about love
with a good repeating line, as well
as good examples and comparisons
about the nature of love.
-I particularly like the verses about
the wild horses and the champagne.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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-Nice image and presentation, kahpot.
-I agree with the message in the notes.
-A well written poem about love
with a good repeating line, as well
as good examples and comparisons
about the nature of love.
-I particularly like the verses about
the wild horses and the champagne.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful and encouraging words, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome.
Comment from June Sargent
Life is full of ups and downs. And so are relationships. The strongest ones will survive and thrive when they're firmly based on love. This poem highlights that type of love.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Life is full of ups and downs. And so are relationships. The strongest ones will survive and thrive when they're firmly based on love. This poem highlights that type of love.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Robert Burns ,,, move over.
This is delightful, and if I was a she I'd be over the moon on a trajectory to Mars and beyond and wouldn't be coming back if you were on Challenger with me... well Maybe not Challenger.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Robert Burns ,,, move over.
This is delightful, and if I was a she I'd be over the moon on a trajectory to Mars and beyond and wouldn't be coming back if you were on Challenger with me... well Maybe not Challenger.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kahpot,
This is a lovely free verse love poem. It is full of love and dedication to the person of your choosing. It is well organized and flows nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Kahpot,
This is a lovely free verse love poem. It is full of love and dedication to the person of your choosing. It is well organized and flows nicely.
Well done and good luck in the contest
Cecilia
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written, free, love poem, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I only have one suggestion for you, and that would be that if you would make the background a darker shade of gray, the white lettering would show up better. Patricia.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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This is a beautifully written, free, love poem, and I wish you the very best in the contest. I only have one suggestion for you, and that would be that if you would make the background a darker shade of gray, the white lettering would show up better. Patricia.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Patricia, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
