Representation (acrostic sonnet)
Acrostic contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
This poem, was so Beautifully written, an Acrostic Sonnet, with rhyme and meter perfectly applied, along with well chosen words.
It was a joy to read, a definite winner...
Congratulations on the Win...
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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This poem, was so Beautifully written, an Acrostic Sonnet, with rhyme and meter perfectly applied, along with well chosen words.
It was a joy to read, a definite winner...
Congratulations on the Win...
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for the congrats and big sixer, Victoria. I always like challenging my brain and acrostic sonnets tend to help. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
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Ron
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You're very welcome, Ron, it was indeed a pleasant poem to read...
I like the idea of challenging one's brain, and I also like the Sonnet form, but an Acrostic Sonnet, that was a real challenge...
Enjoy Your Day!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment from Harambe iz ur Daddy
"Regarding sense of awe our words have missed", what a great line, and you said it many different clever ways. Crap, I already voted for another very impressive 2D acrostic in this contest before I saw yours! This is well executed, a good challenge for the strict format, and there are few who can pull that off while keeping on message. Let alone a somewhat abstract one full of satire. Nice work pal.
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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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"Regarding sense of awe our words have missed", what a great line, and you said it many different clever ways. Crap, I already voted for another very impressive 2D acrostic in this contest before I saw yours! This is well executed, a good challenge for the strict format, and there are few who can pull that off while keeping on message. Let alone a somewhat abstract one full of satire. Nice work pal.
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Comment Written 20-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the awesome review and fat sixer, Harambe. Yeah, I love artistically slandering. Lol. Plus, I love the challenge of acrostic sonnets. Yes, the 2D piece is a great write too. I actually think those are harder to pull off than a sonnet. Glad you came up with idea. I appreciate the stop in and six, friend. Have a great weekend and thanks again.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so thought provoking! I really love how you share the balance between writing and visual appeal. That last line was great - "Naive, the masses yearn a pretty page" - it wraps it all up so perfectly! This is honest and beautifully written. Fantastic work!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Your poem is so thought provoking! I really love how you share the balance between writing and visual appeal. That last line was great - "Naive, the masses yearn a pretty page" - it wraps it all up so perfectly! This is honest and beautifully written. Fantastic work!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2025
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Thank you for the awesome review, Michael. I really appreciate the generous stars and kind comments, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a great upcoming weekend.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This acrostic sonnet is clever well rhymed and metered and I enjoyed the sentiments. This is skilfully written as this is not easy to achieve and I enjoyed this well formed poem. A fine melody within and I was definitely seduced here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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This acrostic sonnet is clever well rhymed and metered and I enjoyed the sentiments. This is skilfully written as this is not easy to achieve and I enjoyed this well formed poem. A fine melody within and I was definitely seduced here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Hey, Dolly, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and giant sixer. I always love to challenge myself. I find trying to combine a sonnet and acrostic fulfills that need sometimes. Lol. I dearly appreciate the stop in and kind rating. I'm glad you liked my little offering. Have yourself a wonderful day and thank you again.
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You are most welcome, well deserved x
