How Are You?
How honest of an answer would you like?4 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
What? Said the cow to the mise in the field but how did we know that if we weren't there? Is this what is called jibberish or what would would have been found if I had taken the road less taken. I am profounded. The only sentence that I agree with was the loss of Coach Saban with reverence.
And another thing... is there a chance we knew each other at a time and place? College? Brevard? Presbyterian? Where we lived Philly, Trenton, Levittown? Your name is familiar.
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What? Said the cow to the mise in the field but how did we know that if we weren't there? Is this what is called jibberish or what would would have been found if I had taken the road less taken. I am profounded. The only sentence that I agree with was the loss of Coach Saban with reverence.
And another thing... is there a chance we knew each other at a time and place? College? Brevard? Presbyterian? Where we lived Philly, Trenton, Levittown? Your name is familiar.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2025
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You have the right idea. I love the authenticity so what is it you want to fall back or just leave you alone?
Diapers, fall back!
Scrappy feelings, fall back!
Saying How are you? Fall back!
I get it. That's humorous. I love the imagery about yout baby. I also learned about Spanish phrases for How are you?
Excellent writing!
Best wishes I hope you will do well!
Alex
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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You have the right idea. I love the authenticity so what is it you want to fall back or just leave you alone?
Diapers, fall back!
Scrappy feelings, fall back!
Saying How are you? Fall back!
I get it. That's humorous. I love the imagery about yout baby. I also learned about Spanish phrases for How are you?
Excellent writing!
Best wishes I hope you will do well!
Alex
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you!! You made an excellent point, and I took your review into consideration and made a small addition. At the end, I changed it to "So, "Honesty is the best policy": Time to Fall Back! So instead: I'm fine." instead of my previous ending of just "So instead: I'm fine." Do you think that improves it?
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Definitely! Yes! That ties it back with the contest. :)
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is hilarious! I love how you break down "How are you?" with such sarcasm! The bit about St. Patrick's Day and toddler chaos had me laughing out loud! Your humor makes even the crappiest day entertaining. Absolutely loved it!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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This is hilarious! I love how you break down "How are you?" with such sarcasm! The bit about St. Patrick's Day and toddler chaos had me laughing out loud! Your humor makes even the crappiest day entertaining. Absolutely loved it!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you understood the sarcastic humor as intended!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A humorous post and I enjoyed the ride here. When someone asks, "how are you", they never really want a true answer as no one wants to hear negativity, so we always say "I'm fine!". I enjoyed this fun-filled post, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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A humorous post and I enjoyed the ride here. When someone asks, "how are you", they never really want a true answer as no one wants to hear negativity, so we always say "I'm fine!". I enjoyed this fun-filled post, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much!! I'm so glad you saw the humor in it and enjoyed it.
