Rich and Thick
Murphy by name Murphy by nature. What*s a girl to do?2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
Your limerick almost conveys what we see in that photo. You introduce the girl and the guy very well in the first four lines. But your last line is too cumbersome and unclear. Rephrase it.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Your limerick almost conveys what we see in that photo. You introduce the girl and the guy very well in the first four lines. But your last line is too cumbersome and unclear. Rephrase it.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Have done, Rod. I spotted it just before your review. If you were willing to reappraise I’d be well pleased. If not, thanks anyway.
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I reread and rerated your poem. Much better.
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You’re a gent. Much appreciated, and happy St. Paddy’s day.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was such a fun limerick! It's so funny. The word choice is perfect. And the Irish theme makes it perfect for today! The last line landed perfectly - wrapping it all up with a chuckle. This one's a keeper!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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This was such a fun limerick! It's so funny. The word choice is perfect. And the Irish theme makes it perfect for today! The last line landed perfectly - wrapping it all up with a chuckle. This one's a keeper!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
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Many thanks, Michael.
