Muse in a Storm
A Marianne Poem for the club challenge10 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Many will identify with your words as our inspiration is sometimes hard to locate. A little rest and a walk in the park often restores it, I enjoyed your word, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Many will identify with your words as our inspiration is sometimes hard to locate. A little rest and a walk in the park often restores it, I enjoyed your word, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your Marianne poem! I like how you give us a message to keep trying as artists - whether it's paintings or poems, someday, they may all become that coherent unique style.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Great job with your Marianne poem! I like how you give us a message to keep trying as artists - whether it's paintings or poems, someday, they may all become that coherent unique style.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Your excellent picture perfectly describes your poem. It is an excellent portrayal of the poet's search for the correct words to tell me what's on his mind. I look forward to reading more of your excellent work.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Your excellent picture perfectly describes your poem. It is an excellent portrayal of the poet's search for the correct words to tell me what's on his mind. I look forward to reading more of your excellent work.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, kym,
Lovely Marianne Poem and surreal picture. Good composition and no punctuation errors.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Â Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Hello, kym,
Lovely Marianne Poem and surreal picture. Good composition and no punctuation errors.
Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Â Atticus
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
The artwork is provocative and reminds us of the challenges faced by artists. Creativity is subject to the whims of our muse. And the path is not always serene. But in the end, hopefully productive,
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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The artwork is provocative and reminds us of the challenges faced by artists. Creativity is subject to the whims of our muse. And the path is not always serene. But in the end, hopefully productive,
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, yes, sometimes we all struggle for inspiration, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Mark D. R.
One can easily feel the emotion of this poem. I really like the artwork and font choice.
Since it is a ' Marianne' poem, the female muse version would have been my choice LOL
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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One can easily feel the emotion of this poem. I really like the artwork and font choice.
Since it is a ' Marianne' poem, the female muse version would have been my choice LOL
Mark
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Mark, for your wonderful comments and six stars, what a great idea "the female muse version" I never thought about that, as always verry much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Kahpot,
This is a wonderful Marianne poem. It is well organized and flows nicely. I could not find instructions for this poem, so I chose not to do it. You did a great job with this poem.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Kahpot,
This is a wonderful Marianne poem. It is well organized and flows nicely. I could not find instructions for this poem, so I chose not to do it. You did a great job with this poem.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, did you look in the challenge club notes, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is nicely written in the format that you chose and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day a terrific weekend may you also be blessed by God. Patricia.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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This is nicely written in the format that you chose and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day a terrific weekend may you also be blessed by God. Patricia.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
It is sad when we desperately want to write again but the mind is empty and silent as though harsh winds have blown every creative thought away. In such times it is essential to be still and calm, knowing that in time, inspiration will return.
Well said. Good one.
Wendy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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It is sad when we desperately want to write again but the mind is empty and silent as though harsh winds have blown every creative thought away. In such times it is essential to be still and calm, knowing that in time, inspiration will return.
Well said. Good one.
Wendy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Wendy, yes, my muse goes missing often, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
The one thing I know creative people are driven constantly, peace comes when desire is satisfied, the trouble is the the passion and yearning comes again, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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The one thing I know creative people are driven constantly, peace comes when desire is satisfied, the trouble is the the passion and yearning comes again, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2025
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Thank you, Roy, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Most welcome
