The Cracking of Solitude
A Joseph's Star poem2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem shows such a strong journey from stillness to movement. I love that! The way you go from cold and frozen to warm and racing feels really powerful. Each stanza builds on the last. I feels like real change is happening. This was a great read - well done!
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Your poem shows such a strong journey from stillness to movement. I love that! The way you go from cold and frozen to warm and racing feels really powerful. Each stanza builds on the last. I feels like real change is happening. This was a great read - well done!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
Comment from jessizero
When all read together, this is a beautiful poem. If you break it down, you got all of the requirements of the form correct for the writing prompt. The picture you used was nice, too. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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When all read together, this is a beautiful poem. If you break it down, you got all of the requirements of the form correct for the writing prompt. The picture you used was nice, too. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
