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Give Carrothead a Break

Intended Self-righteousness

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Comment from Esther Brown
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A wise man in the O.T. said...Spouting off before listening to the facts is both shameful and foolish. A truly wise person uses few words, a person with understanding is even-tempered. Even fools are thought wise when they keep silent; with their mouths shut, they seem intelligent. (Proverbs).
The country voted. A country divided against itself cannot stand. Enough already. Good job! Esther

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2025
    Thanks
reply by Esther Brown on 17-Mar-2025
    I read that and realized it might have come off as judging. I apologize. Anything remotely about politics sets me off. Usually I take my own advice and just ignore criticism of T because I voted for his platform. Sometimes when something is corrupt to it's core, you throw it out and start all over. It is bound to be painful, and cause distress. I don't know what is really going on so should keep my mouth shut and keep praying.
Comment from jim vecchio
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I don't know your views on the Bible, but I believe it is the word of God. King Saul was (unlike Trump) an ungodly ruler nd David had his chance to catch him unaware and unarmed, but would not harm him because at that moment, Saul was the anointed of the Lord. We need to pray for our leaders, not tear them apart.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    I agree
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Tom,

This story rings true, and yet the crooked politicians can't see past their nose. Why is that do you suppose? I agree with term limits, just like they have on the president. Change is never easy, but something needs to happen.

Well done my friend

Cecilia

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    I agree
Comment from evilynne
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I won't and can't even discuss politics and refuse to make any comments regarding that here. I believe you when you say that your piece is humorous, and I do get it (I think). So let me just say your writing is excellent as always, but I don't have six stars, then wish you the best of luck in the contest. Evi

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Evi: I missed where it said humorous. I went with the prompt "go back," and thought when the framers got together in the 18th century when the colonies had differences but still worked together to frame the greatest work ever. That would be nice.
reply by evilynne on 15-Mar-2025
    Sorry if I misread! No matter, the writing is great. Sometimes my brain doesn't grasp certain ideas, Evi
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Well written. Good words, etymologically speaking.
"I hope we can not use this to argue politics or divisive topics. This is a humor contest." - I'd say you laid this rule to waste and I refuse to take the bait.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    I guess I missed the "humor" prompt. I caught the fall back instead, and wished that we would catch the fervor the originator felt when the country began. My intent was to have us join hands and sing kumbaya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I applaud you Tom, for this post. You spoke so many truths here and the American public seem to be looking for someone to hate as they are mostly unhappy with themselves. At last I am hearing from someone with their head screwed on instead of the rants from those who cannot see the wood for the trees. I enjoyed every word here as you speak so much sense and it is a pity that the American public are so divided, and the Democrats are portraying themselves as hateful and full of jealousy.

We are experiencing some terrible times under Kier Starmer in Britain and everyone is unhappy. Our Prime Minister who is the leader of the labour party is a far left wing Politician and he is dragging our country down into the depths of despair. He will never be re-elected and we are suffering in Britain like you did in the US under Biden control.

Thank you for posting this level headed opinion Tom, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    My intent was to have us join hands and sing kumbaya
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 15-Mar-2025
    I doubt this will happen as people in the US have staunch views, but I liked your suggestion x
Comment from kahpot
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A great read, here down under every time the leaders get tv. time they just berate each other, all the news is he said-he said, I really wonder what would happen if they worked together, oh! of course, no would have anything to complain about, what a shame/sham, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Thanks
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This makes a lot of sense. Your passion shines through in your writing! I can really feel how much you care about the state of things. The line "garbage-strewn sewers of Washington," really drives home your frustration! The Golden Rule reference was a great touch too! Keep writing with this fire - your voice is powerful!



 Comment Written 14-Mar-2025


reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
    Patriotically intended.