Thoughts of a Man
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Take a walk"Words to paper bring happiness
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Comment from patcelaw
I see this is your first post on fan story and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day. Also, I would like to welcome you to fan story and I hope that we can help you with your writing if that is what you would like. May you feel free to ask anyone for help because I am sure most of us would be very willing to help you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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I see this is your first post on fan story and I very much enjoyed listening to it. May you have a wonderful day. Also, I would like to welcome you to fan story and I hope that we can help you with your writing if that is what you would like. May you feel free to ask anyone for help because I am sure most of us would be very willing to help you. Patricia.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2025
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:) much appreciated thank you and GodBless
Comment from Benny Beeharry
There nothing like walking into the woods, the freshness and the sunshine getting through the foliage and the breeze are all premium and make you feel good. But of course go only as far as you are safe.
The writing is excellent and carries on with advantages to get on a walk in the woods.
Benny
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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There nothing like walking into the woods, the freshness and the sunshine getting through the foliage and the breeze are all premium and make you feel good. But of course go only as far as you are safe.
The writing is excellent and carries on with advantages to get on a walk in the woods.
Benny
Comment Written 15-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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100 appreciate you God Bless
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your walk in the woods. I believe it would be relaxing to be in nature. The peace and quiet, with only the birds making a sound brings peace to the soul. Thank you for letting me come along on your walk. I really enjoyed it.
Welcome to Fanstory.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed your walk in the woods. I believe it would be relaxing to be in nature. The peace and quiet, with only the birds making a sound brings peace to the soul. Thank you for letting me come along on your walk. I really enjoyed it.
Welcome to Fanstory.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you enjoying Fanstory and the writers
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem shares the beauty of nature so well! I love how you describe the sounds and feelings of the woods. It makes me feel like I'm there. The part about walking for miles until time plays tricks on you is perfect! And that last line is powerful. Yes, Mother Nature truly has her own way! I've experienced that before. What a wonderful first post. Welcome! Such a great read!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Your poem shares the beauty of nature so well! I love how you describe the sounds and feelings of the woods. It makes me feel like I'm there. The part about walking for miles until time plays tricks on you is perfect! And that last line is powerful. Yes, Mother Nature truly has her own way! I've experienced that before. What a wonderful first post. Welcome! Such a great read!
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you
Comment from Sarah Probe S.
congratulations on your First Milestone, and thanks such a very inspirational poem about nature, it's true that it heals and relieves stress, to walk through the woods and your poem here portrayed that feeling of freedom and total peace perfectly, well donne
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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congratulations on your First Milestone, and thanks such a very inspirational poem about nature, it's true that it heals and relieves stress, to walk through the woods and your poem here portrayed that feeling of freedom and total peace perfectly, well donne
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2025
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Thank you and GodBless
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Welcome! And congratulations on your first post here! This is an excellent poem. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I like the rhyming and action, emotion. Thank you for sharing this.
One typo note:
earths surface
(earth's)
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Welcome! And congratulations on your first post here! This is an excellent poem. Good colorful descriptions and imagery. I like the rhyming and action, emotion. Thank you for sharing this.
One typo note:
earths surface
(earth's)
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Appreciate your kind words glad you enjoyed it been working all day and just signed up been on phone all day maneuvering on this we sit looking forward to getting on laptop when get home either way grammar is not my strong suit
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I was also able to edit it thanks
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A brisk walk outside absorbing nature is refreshing as long as we don't get lost! I once climbed down a mountain and didn't know the way and was worried about getting to the bottom before it went dark, but I did make it.
I have one suggestion for your poem, arrange those lines one under the other to make your poem easier to read. I welcome you to Fanstory, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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A brisk walk outside absorbing nature is refreshing as long as we don't get lost! I once climbed down a mountain and didn't know the way and was worried about getting to the bottom before it went dark, but I did make it.
I have one suggestion for your poem, arrange those lines one under the other to make your poem easier to read. I welcome you to Fanstory, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Understood need as much feedback as possible look forward to Maneuvering on this site and learning as I go
