In His Element
Hunter? Prey?5 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
Seriously, I thought this was going to be a tale of terror. Well, I guess it was for poor ole Bobby. Lol. Yeah! I laughed at the end as it reminded me of my mother trying to find parking at the zoo.
She opted to park illegally, and an officer reminded her. She asked how much the ticket would be. "Twenty-five dollars," he said. She found this acceptable and remained parked. This is the only ticket she has received in her eighty + years. Oh, and she's still driving, so it's just a matter of time now. Lol.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Seriously, I thought this was going to be a tale of terror. Well, I guess it was for poor ole Bobby. Lol. Yeah! I laughed at the end as it reminded me of my mother trying to find parking at the zoo.
She opted to park illegally, and an officer reminded her. She asked how much the ticket would be. "Twenty-five dollars," he said. She found this acceptable and remained parked. This is the only ticket she has received in her eighty + years. Oh, and she's still driving, so it's just a matter of time now. Lol.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 13-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I find that the trials of middle-age adulthood are just as scary as any horror story boogeyman.
That's a great story about your mother. I wish her many years of good health.
Thanks so much.
-Steve
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True facts, my friend, life is scary. Thank you for the healthy wishes for my mother, she is an incredible woman.
God bless,
Steve
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When I gained my driving licence, I had never heard of parking fines and learned the hard way, something that they never teach you when learning to drive, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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When I gained my driving licence, I had never heard of parking fines and learned the hard way, something that they never teach you when learning to drive, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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I grew up in a big American city. It's hardcoded into our daily lives here. I probably learned a good amount of bad words just based on parking tickets.
Thanks so much.
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! I guess Bobby found reverse parking a lot harder than he anticipated, your build up and ending are excellent, a wonderful read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Ha! Ha! I guess Bobby found reverse parking a lot harder than he anticipated, your build up and ending are excellent, a wonderful read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2025
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Thanks for taking the time and for your kind words. I appreciate it.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Good artwork. This is an interesting story. Good colorful descriptions. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. I think many people could relate to the surprise parking ticket. Best wishes, Alex
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Good artwork. This is an interesting story. Good colorful descriptions. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. I think many people could relate to the surprise parking ticket. Best wishes, Alex
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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The picture is cropped from one of my daughter's drawings. Thank you for taking the time and for your kind words.
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That's awesome. I'm an artist and I love to draw eyes, too. 'You're welcome!
Comment from Stacy M.S.
Ha, I am sorry but that ending just made me laugh out loud.
Poor Bobby, he had to learn the hard way!
You know, I like this...very witty, I had no idea what was truly going on until the end!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Ha, I am sorry but that ending just made me laugh out loud.
Poor Bobby, he had to learn the hard way!
You know, I like this...very witty, I had no idea what was truly going on until the end!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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If it coaxed any sound out of you at all, it's definitely a win. Thank you for taking the time and for your kind words.
