My Oma
The Women who inspires me3 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your Grandmother sounds like a stoic and strong woman and I enjoyed your poem about her. Perhaps your poem would read much better if each line was laid out under each other.
You have a spelling error here;
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Love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Your Grandmother sounds like a stoic and strong woman and I enjoyed your poem about her. Perhaps your poem would read much better if each line was laid out under each other.
You have a spelling error here;
unfortanally
Love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you for letting me know about spelling mistakes.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent story for the challenge. It reminded me of my cousins and their Oma. Aww. I have MS, but I have spinal stenosis too. I can relate. If I don't stretch and move daily, I am stiff and I'm not even 60 yet. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. God bless your Oma.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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This is an excellent story for the challenge. It reminded me of my cousins and their Oma. Aww. I have MS, but I have spinal stenosis too. I can relate. If I don't stretch and move daily, I am stiff and I'm not even 60 yet. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. God bless your Oma.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 12-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2025
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Thank you for your review Remember just keep moving forward.
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I will. You're welcome!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story about your Oma is so full of love. It really shows how much she means to you. I love how you shared her determination - especially with her pushing forward despite her struggles. The way she taught you to believe in yourself is beautiful. I think that lesson will stay with you forever. This was such a touching tribute to a truly incredible woman! Keep writing and sharing these wonderful stories.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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Your story about your Oma is so full of love. It really shows how much she means to you. I love how you shared her determination - especially with her pushing forward despite her struggles. The way she taught you to believe in yourself is beautiful. I think that lesson will stay with you forever. This was such a touching tribute to a truly incredible woman! Keep writing and sharing these wonderful stories.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2025
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thank you so much that means a lot.Just starting out as a hopeful writer means the world to see these nice comments.
