Lipstick Murder
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Price of Betrayal "After a lifetime of suffering, Tess’s world shatte
6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Revenge is sweet in this right and perhaps this man is getting what he deserves! I enjoyed this inventive post and there is nothing like a woman who has been wronged having a bit of payback. I enjoyed this powerful story, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Revenge is sweet in this right and perhaps this man is getting what he deserves! I enjoyed this inventive post and there is nothing like a woman who has been wronged having a bit of payback. I enjoyed this powerful story, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I', so glad you enjoyed it. He did get what he deserved. Poor Tess having to endure his abuse. Hopefully this will help her heal. Thank you again for reading my chapter, take care.
Comment from patcelaw
This was very well written and was a pleasure to listen to your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation all are very good and that's what contributes to the pleasure that we receive when we listen to your work. Patricia.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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This was very well written and was a pleasure to listen to your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation all are very good and that's what contributes to the pleasure that we receive when we listen to your work. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for listening to my story. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Tess is on a mission to right some wrongs done to her and her mom. Thank you again for your kind review, take care.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love this first chapter and I cannot wait to read more. Are there more husbands on her kill -it list? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Love this first chapter and I cannot wait to read more. Are there more husbands on her kill -it list? Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and such wonderful praise. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you so much for your marvelous six stars, That's quite an honor, thank you. Telling you who's next will spoil all the fun. Thank you again for your marvelous review and your wonderful rating, take care.
Comment from Aiona
This piece is an engrossing beginning to the story. If there were any typos, I didn't see them! The dialogue was believable, and the situation was very tense, which kept me reading. Skillfully done!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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This piece is an engrossing beginning to the story. If there were any typos, I didn't see them! The dialogue was believable, and the situation was very tense, which kept me reading. Skillfully done!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter and for your wonderful five star review. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Tess has a lot more in store so I do hope you'll come back and find out what all she does. Thank you again for reading, take care.
Comment from royowen
I rather liked this, although the poor woman might have been spared, but she's made a bucketload for her suffering, an excellent plot and consequential outcome, I loved it, well done, great write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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I rather liked this, although the poor woman might have been spared, but she's made a bucketload for her suffering, an excellent plot and consequential outcome, I loved it, well done, great write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thank you for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I thought about sparing Lisa, but then I thought she could go to the cops tell them what Tess did. I even thought about pairing them together, but Tess despises Lisa for taken Steven away. Thank you again for reading my chapter, and your wonderful five star review. Take care.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how your story kept me on the edge of my seat! Tess is such a strong character. I could feel her emotions with every step she took. The twist with the lipstick and the way she stands up to Steven was so powerful. You made it easy for me to root for her! Great work, I can't wait to see what happens next for Tess!
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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I really enjoyed how your story kept me on the edge of my seat! Tess is such a strong character. I could feel her emotions with every step she took. The twist with the lipstick and the way she stands up to Steven was so powerful. You made it easy for me to root for her! Great work, I can't wait to see what happens next for Tess!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Tess is a very strong determined woman who plans to right wrongs that were done to her and her mom. Thank you again for reading my chapter and your wonderful five star review, take care.
