Spoilt
A woman you would not want to meet.2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Spoilt, presented with eight ABCB-rhymed quatrains, described a woman enthralled in herself and left unarmed against the reality which becomes hers as well.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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This poem, Spoilt, presented with eight ABCB-rhymed quatrains, described a woman enthralled in herself and left unarmed against the reality which becomes hers as well.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thanks for your review. Imagine working with this woman, it was horrendous! Although she did very little, she may have to try harder selling the handbags now daddy cannot bail her out.
Comment from mermaids
Your poem reads like a mini movie and the tables being turned for this lady is a good thing. Your words are vivid on how she treats people and the universe put her in her place. Excellent story in poetic form.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Your poem reads like a mini movie and the tables being turned for this lady is a good thing. Your words are vivid on how she treats people and the universe put her in her place. Excellent story in poetic form.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2025
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Thanks for your review, it has made my day. Imagine working with her, it was horrendous! Although she actually did very little. Maybe she will put more of an effort in selling handbags now that daddy cannot bail her out.
