A peaceful death
A peaceful death13 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness, this is a chilling tale in more ways than one and I felt the cold in this deathly post Iza, I need a blanket now to warm me up. A well written flash, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness, this is a chilling tale in more ways than one and I felt the cold in this deathly post Iza, I need a blanket now to warm me up. A well written flash, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from Tim Margetts
Iza, wow what a great flash,
All minimalist writing needs to encompass a proper story and also challenge the reader with questions.
I thought at first it was someone lost in a blizzard type of thing, then it was more, finally, who the heck is Yetty?
Tim x
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Iza, wow what a great flash,
All minimalist writing needs to encompass a proper story and also challenge the reader with questions.
I thought at first it was someone lost in a blizzard type of thing, then it was more, finally, who the heck is Yetty?
Tim x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from Noreen Bernardo
This is a well structured poem with curious subject matter. I've witnessed many peaceful deaths in the 25 years I've spent in healthcare.
I looked up the word origin for yetty and found the slang for yeti is abdominal snowman. I found that interesting. Best wishes to you.
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This is a well structured poem with curious subject matter. I've witnessed many peaceful deaths in the 25 years I've spent in healthcare.
I looked up the word origin for yetty and found the slang for yeti is abdominal snowman. I found that interesting. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-fifty-word flash fiction story, A Peaceful Death, has the proper word count and seems to find this woman's last hours in the arms of a yeti.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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This one-hundred-fifty-word flash fiction story, A Peaceful Death, has the proper word count and seems to find this woman's last hours in the arms of a yeti.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for taking a chance on this piece.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You told a very interesting story for this contest entry and used on a few words. You have all the necessary element for a story. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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You told a very interesting story for this contest entry and used on a few words. You have all the necessary element for a story. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for your beautiful review.
Comment from estory
This is an interesting story with a twist; I thought you did a great job of setting the scene, describing the snow and the cold, and death, in these plain, white, austere terms. The twist at the end means not death, but a bride of the Yetti! Maybe it's more or less the same thing...estory
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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This is an interesting story with a twist; I thought you did a great job of setting the scene, describing the snow and the cold, and death, in these plain, white, austere terms. The twist at the end means not death, but a bride of the Yetti! Maybe it's more or less the same thing...estory
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2025
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I just thought a twist in the Frankenstein story will be nice:)
Comment from Begin Again
Here I sit trying to warm up and you, my friend, have me buried beneath the frozen tundra, freezing. Yetty is thriving on ice cubes for brains, wanting a frozen brain. A great flash fiction, Iza with a twist.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Here I sit trying to warm up and you, my friend, have me buried beneath the frozen tundra, freezing. Yetty is thriving on ice cubes for brains, wanting a frozen brain. A great flash fiction, Iza with a twist.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Well is just the effect of my frozen mood as we have had for a week now minus 35-36 and snow all the way.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a horror flash. I can't handle be cold. If the person going under could feel the cold, I sure there would be a struggle. Yetty? Is this the Yeti that is the abonminable snowman? If so, no wonder he wants a frozen birde.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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This is a horror flash. I can't handle be cold. If the person going under could feel the cold, I sure there would be a struggle. Yetty? Is this the Yeti that is the abonminable snowman? If so, no wonder he wants a frozen birde.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Me either or I just got used to it, it's been minus 35-36 for a whole week now.
Comment from royowen
Heh heh. I like that you'll be my forever frozen bride. Cryogenics was around a long time ago, I wonder how many were frozen, an excellent post Iza, you've got an imagination, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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Heh heh. I like that you'll be my forever frozen bride. Cryogenics was around a long time ago, I wonder how many were frozen, an excellent post Iza, you've got an imagination, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2025
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I wrote this under the influence... of the cold we have here. For a week now we are bathing in minus 35-36 degrees here.
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's difficult to think of a story which can be completed in so few words that includes a plot, conflict, struggle and dialogue. It seems as though you've accomplished all four requirements for a good story. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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It's difficult to think of a story which can be completed in so few words that includes a plot, conflict, struggle and dialogue. It seems as though you've accomplished all four requirements for a good story. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2025
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2025
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Thank you so much for your encouragements.
