She
A poem about a woman9 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
beautiful! and maybe you'll meet her one day. I hope so.
a wraith? Did you look at the definition? I thought it meant someone very small, thin, so I looked it up and that's not all.
Just re-read it, and she offers possibilities and impossibility? and I just realized, she holds a snake! Eean. Beware.
Katharine
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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beautiful! and maybe you'll meet her one day. I hope so.
a wraith? Did you look at the definition? I thought it meant someone very small, thin, so I looked it up and that's not all.
Just re-read it, and she offers possibilities and impossibility? and I just realized, she holds a snake! Eean. Beware.
Katharine
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Yes a wraith, also: a ghost or ghostlike image, also: an insubstantial form or semblance. She is by all means an impossibility or my vision of a perfect person is impossible. She brings forth possibilities. I told you I'm a sucky poet. lol
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no, you're not. i just didn't get your meaning. Now I do. :)
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Thanks pome.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well written poem him about a woman, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. You have described her very nicely, even though you have never met this woman that you're talking about. You have a real understanding as to who she is. Patricia.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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This is a very well written poem him about a woman, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. You have described her very nicely, even though you have never met this woman that you're talking about. You have a real understanding as to who she is. Patricia.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
Absolutely awesome poem about a woman. I like the respect you give this woman. I know women like all the bold and strong character you present.
I embrace her spirit. Good job on the contest entry.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Absolutely awesome poem about a woman. I like the respect you give this woman. I know women like all the bold and strong character you present.
I embrace her spirit. Good job on the contest entry.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Oh, wow, thanks.
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Thanks for your respnse.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Another great verse, Eean! I'm not surprised she's in your imagination. She would be a hard act to follow:) Very much a spiritual entity and, as you say, "an impossibility." But that doesn't detract from the excellence of your sentiments which are beautifully complemented with your image. This is a goodie. I wish you luck, you old romantic, you! Debbie. PS And don't say you're not:)
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Another great verse, Eean! I'm not surprised she's in your imagination. She would be a hard act to follow:) Very much a spiritual entity and, as you say, "an impossibility." But that doesn't detract from the excellence of your sentiments which are beautifully complemented with your image. This is a goodie. I wish you luck, you old romantic, you! Debbie. PS And don't say you're not:)
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I have a ghostwriter. I say "girl goooood rrrr" and he writes a poem. It's working fine, since my lobotomy.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Oh Eean, your author's notes are almost asa beautiful as your poem.
And your poem is as lovely as they come. I was so touched by the elegance of how you saw this woman you have never met before. I wonder if a woman this spectacular even exists? I see her as a goddess! Virtual six, my dear friend!
Love, Debi
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Oh Eean, your author's notes are almost asa beautiful as your poem.
And your poem is as lovely as they come. I was so touched by the elegance of how you saw this woman you have never met before. I wonder if a woman this spectacular even exists? I see her as a goddess! Virtual six, my dear friend!
Love, Debi
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thanks. She has to exist, I have a pedestal ready for her to fall off, in my living room right now.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Poem About a Woman contest. A lovely description of the woman that all women would aspire to be. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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An excellent entry for the Poem About a Woman contest. A lovely description of the woman that all women would aspire to be. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Are you telling me women admire other women? Thanks. I wanted to write something that didn't rhyme. I wanted to write something more like me, I'm just not getting there. It's the words. What feels good, sounds bad.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
I know you wrote this about me but were too shy to put that acknowledgment into the Author's Notes. It's okay, though; I know, and who cares if the others do or not.
Best of luck in the contest. I hope it makes its way to the Winner's Circle!! xoxox
PS Cool artwork you chose! xo
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I know you wrote this about me but were too shy to put that acknowledgment into the Author's Notes. It's okay, though; I know, and who cares if the others do or not.
Best of luck in the contest. I hope it makes its way to the Winner's Circle!! xoxox
PS Cool artwork you chose! xo
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Mrs. Allen.
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Hahahahaha. I recognize that!! xoxox
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Do not.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Eean,
This is a beautiful poem about a woman. You're letting that romantic side shine through. It is well organized and flows nicely.
Well done my friend and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Eean,
This is a beautiful poem about a woman. You're letting that romantic side shine through. It is well organized and flows nicely.
Well done my friend and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you.
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You're welcome
Comment from June Sargent
But I am sure she exists. These are beautiful qualities she has. To balance fierceness with gentleness is not easy. To be able to reach for the ethereal and still be grounded is a gift. I'd love to meet her someday myself.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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But I am sure she exists. These are beautiful qualities she has. To balance fierceness with gentleness is not easy. To be able to reach for the ethereal and still be grounded is a gift. I'd love to meet her someday myself.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Me too. I love those sunflowers. Van Gogh painted a lot of them.
