Ben Paul Persons
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13 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Very quiet chapter, chance to save, chance to heal and a chance to start all over again and not forget where you started. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Very quiet chapter, chance to save, chance to heal and a chance to start all over again and not forget where you started. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your very nice review.
(Constant stress and tension wears me out.)
Comment from Wendy G
I think I'd be preferring a full shower after that experience. Ben Paul and Sylvia are never short of adventures, that's for sure. A fine chapter, and I am sure they will appreciate the beauty of Alaska.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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I think I'd be preferring a full shower after that experience. Ben Paul and Sylvia are never short of adventures, that's for sure. A fine chapter, and I am sure they will appreciate the beauty of Alaska.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I tried to make clear that the vomit was not from a sour stomach, but...
I appreciate your review, as always.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
They are having a wonderful time as they pass through California on their way to Alaska. I wondered how they were financing their marvelous trip, but he has his insurance money from his house. Definitely time for the trip of a lifetime. The incident in the airport was pretty remarkable, especially since the woman is apparently no longer ill. This has been a great trip so far and I'm looking for them to have great adventures in Alaska.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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They are having a wonderful time as they pass through California on their way to Alaska. I wondered how they were financing their marvelous trip, but he has his insurance money from his house. Definitely time for the trip of a lifetime. The incident in the airport was pretty remarkable, especially since the woman is apparently no longer ill. This has been a great trip so far and I'm looking for them to have great adventures in Alaska.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2025
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Thank you. But be prepared, Alaska is/was a wild place.
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It is still a very strange place. There is only one trainline from north to south in Alaska. On July 4 the people in one village gather beside the train track and moon all the travelers.
Comment from eliz100
This is another excellent chapter. As this chapter continues, it is also a walk down memory lane for Ben Paul. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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This is another excellent chapter. As this chapter continues, it is also a walk down memory lane for Ben Paul. I do not see any room for improvement. Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I always appreciate your reviews.
Comment from jim vecchio
I always enjoy the six-worthy adventures of Ben Paul, one of the most unique characters on this site. Also, I appreciate the prayer and overt Christianity of the series. This one made me ish I could ho back and re-do my Clifornia trip in my mis-spent youth.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I always enjoy the six-worthy adventures of Ben Paul, one of the most unique characters on this site. Also, I appreciate the prayer and overt Christianity of the series. This one made me ish I could ho back and re-do my Clifornia trip in my mis-spent youth.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you. Northern California is beautiful.
Hope you're feeling better.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, the writing is fine as always, as is the story chapter. But I must say that those with weak stomachs might be struggling a bit to keep from puking. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Well, the writing is fine as always, as is the story chapter. But I must say that those with weak stomachs might be struggling a bit to keep from puking. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Well, there's puke... and there's puke. (This one wasn't from a sour stomach. maybe I should say that.)
smiley face here
Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from BethShelby
I happy to see the saga of Ben Paul and Sylvia continuing. It seems they are still very deeply in love an continuing to find adventure everywhere they go. They also find people they can help along the way. God is still using the younger Ben Paul.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I happy to see the saga of Ben Paul and Sylvia continuing. It seems they are still very deeply in love an continuing to find adventure everywhere they go. They also find people they can help along the way. God is still using the younger Ben Paul.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you.
Ben Paul would be tickled that you called him the 'younger' one. He is the son, but here he's 83 years old (1973) and his father died when he was 30 (1890). (smiley face here)
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Traveling with Ben Paul is like traveling with a tour guide:-)
A bit of travel down memory lane here, also.
God does work in mysterious ways, doesn't he?
But "yuk" on the puke, lol!
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Traveling with Ben Paul is like traveling with a tour guide:-)
A bit of travel down memory lane here, also.
God does work in mysterious ways, doesn't he?
But "yuk" on the puke, lol!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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smiley face here
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from royowen
Ben Paul decides to go to Alaska where his father was killed, they apprehended people who need a pray for healing and a lady who has cancer, but I love the reaction, our comes the gunk, which obviously is the cancer, and gets over those close, but it looks like the cancer is healed, beautifully written Wayne, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Ben Paul decides to go to Alaska where his father was killed, they apprehended people who need a pray for healing and a lady who has cancer, but I love the reaction, our comes the gunk, which obviously is the cancer, and gets over those close, but it looks like the cancer is healed, beautifully written Wayne, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your very uplifting review.
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Welcome
Comment from Jacob1395
I thought this was really engaging, Wayne, and I loved how you described the location through the dialogue of your characters. I felt like I could see what they were seeing and this made me feel like I was there with them. An excellent, well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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I thought this was really engaging, Wayne, and I loved how you described the location through the dialogue of your characters. I felt like I could see what they were seeing and this made me feel like I was there with them. An excellent, well written piece, I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2025
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Thank you! I'm honored and blessed by your very nice review.
