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Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet

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Miranda finds herself in another situation.

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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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GW,

This is a great continuation of the story. At least Dougie woke up for a minute. There is hope of him fully recovering. This story is organized well.

Cecilia

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2025

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Poor Dougie, he's seriously hurt. I also feel bad for Waylon. I remember going to the hospital to see my mother when she had a stroke. She died a week later. I hope Dougie recovers and Miranda doesn't get in trouble. Well done, I enjoyed this chapter.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025

Comment from Ric Myworld
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Well, ice cream might not take Waylon's mind off Dougie's condition, but it sure might lesson the worry for a minute. I'm just saying . . .
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Ice cream helps every situation. Thanks so much. Gretchen
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well written and it flows together very well. When is his read aloud? I wish you the very best with your writing. Your sentence and structure and your paragraphing are both very well done as is your punctuation. Patricia.

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Patricia. Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Gretchen,
I'm a little afraid that Miranda is going to mess up the good thing she has going with Mitch by not heeding his warning. I know its in her nature to want to get to the bottom of things, but it's not very wise, in my opinion.
This is another exceptional chapter gal. I could see it all playing out in my mind. All except the Chinese food. I've never been a fan. Italian, or Mexican, you bet. I don't like gooey, soft stuff too much, but that's just me.
Nurses, while so necessary, can be sticklers for the rules. What a bummer. Of course Waylon won't be getting any sleep any time soon.
Well done my friend.
Tom

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Tom. I could eat Chinese several times a week. Just can't afford to. Lol. Gretchen
Comment from Jim Wile
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This was a well written and convincing chapter, Gretchen. Mitch gives Miranda a warning about talking to the suspects, but doesn't discourage her completely from investigating. He knows how smart and intuitive she is.

You make us really feel for Waylon who just wants his father to wake up, poor guy. And I loved the real-life touch of Miranda nudging Mitch when he mentions checking for brain damage. She truly cares for Waylon and wants to spare him any extra grief.

Hmm... "child-size footprints" huh?

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Jim. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Poor Waylon is suffering as his Father is in a delicate state of health just now. I'm glad that Mitch is being positive but his cheerful suggestion will not encourage Waylon to be happy. Let us hope this flicker of life means that Dougie is recovering, another fine chapter Gretchen, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Mitch is a bit upset that Miranda has approached the Evenhoff teen with questions about the murdered man. He isn't saying she can't sleuth; she just isn't allowed to talk to the Evenhoffs. Waylon is so happy his father is waking up from his injuries.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much, Carol. Gretchen
Comment from royowen
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I like Miranda's instincts, she has similar instincts to mine when it comes to people. Sometimes I can't put my hand on it sometimes, even church goers, but we must shut judgement down, and get the log out of our eyes. But it's handy when doing detective work and remove the log, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    I always go with my gut feeling on people. I think it may have saved my life a time or two. Thank you so much. Gretchen
reply by royowen on 23-Jan-2025
    Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am glad Mitch was understanding and concerned. He loves Miranda and that's a good thing. I am pretty sure Miranda is on the right track with Terence's mom. Love the story.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 23-Jan-2025
    Thank you so much. Gretchen