2025 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Fire Knocking At Our Door".
9 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Very good opening lines show
the emotional impact these fires are having.
-The last two show what people are
going through as they try to see
what has happened with their own home.
-I hope things settle down soon,
and that you stay safe, along with
those in your community.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-Very good opening lines show
the emotional impact these fires are having.
-The last two show what people are
going through as they try to see
what has happened with their own home.
-I hope things settle down soon,
and that you stay safe, along with
those in your community.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊 happy weekend.
Gypsy
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You are very welcome.
Comment from kahpot
These/your fires are so bad, I watch with prayers every morning, I do hope you and my American friends on FS. are safe, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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These/your fires are so bad, I watch with prayers every morning, I do hope you and my American friends on FS. are safe, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and Ive never seen anything like it, Thank goodness you're okay so far, and hopefully you don't have to evacuate, scary time indeed
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and Ive never seen anything like it, Thank goodness you're okay so far, and hopefully you don't have to evacuate, scary time indeed
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
wow a mile away and no evac order yet?
well, stay inside and out of the smoke
and you will be in my thoughts
hoping you don't have to evacuate!!
a great jueju poem for this
strong message
smooth flow
good connection from line to line
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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wow a mile away and no evac order yet?
well, stay inside and out of the smoke
and you will be in my thoughts
hoping you don't have to evacuate!!
a great jueju poem for this
strong message
smooth flow
good connection from line to line
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2025
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Having to be ready to go any minute is very stressful. Also figuring out what to take or not to take. I wish we got the notice already and stop being in limbo.
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from Nicki.B
Oh my goodness thankfully you are safe I had no ideayou lived close by the fires. This vivid poem captures the devasting moment that is after destroying people's homes with lives lost. Very powerful imagery and presentation. Take care and I'll prayer the fires stay clear from your home and anyone else's!
Best Wishes
Nicki xox
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Oh my goodness thankfully you are safe I had no ideayou lived close by the fires. This vivid poem captures the devasting moment that is after destroying people's homes with lives lost. Very powerful imagery and presentation. Take care and I'll prayer the fires stay clear from your home and anyone else's!
Best Wishes
Nicki xox
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Dear Gypsy, I forgot you lived in California and am so sorry not to have mentioned it. I can't begin to imagine what you're going through but, at least, you have a good plan of action. You skilfully convey the stress you're under in your verse, not just from the fire knocking at your door but also the frantic activity of folk around you. My prayers for you, your family and your home. Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Dear Gypsy, I forgot you lived in California and am so sorry not to have mentioned it. I can't begin to imagine what you're going through but, at least, you have a good plan of action. You skilfully convey the stress you're under in your verse, not just from the fire knocking at your door but also the frantic activity of folk around you. My prayers for you, your family and your home. Debbie
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Wendy G
Please stay safe. Leave sooner than necessary if you can - here in Australia we know the speed and intensity of these fires, and they can so quickly become disastrous, and impossible to flee. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Please stay safe. Leave sooner than necessary if you can - here in Australia we know the speed and intensity of these fires, and they can so quickly become disastrous, and impossible to flee. My thoughts and prayers are with you.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. We are ready to go when we get a warning. It's a big movement than 400 miles so we won't leave against we have to, but it is very scary and stressful. Sad🥲😮💨
Comment from DonandVicki
I have been praying for you and all those affected by the fire, we are in San Diego and watch with Horror at the devastation and lives lost. I will continue to pray.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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I have been praying for you and all those affected by the fire, we are in San Diego and watch with Horror at the devastation and lives lost. I will continue to pray.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate the prayers and kindness. My granddaughter lives in Anaheim, she is safe, thank God.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very well presented poem about the cure situation so many are facing as these fires continue to burn. I am sure that your safety is the chief priority, but the sad reality that so many have faced in losing their homes are expressed in your words.
Thank you for posting, I know that this is not easy to speak about.RJ
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Very well presented poem about the cure situation so many are facing as these fires continue to burn. I am sure that your safety is the chief priority, but the sad reality that so many have faced in losing their homes are expressed in your words.
Thank you for posting, I know that this is not easy to speak about.RJ
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your kindness. My granddaughter lives in Anaheim, she is safe, thank God.
Gypsy
