Miranda Chronicles: Teacher's Pet
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Talking In His Sleep"Miranda finds herself in another situation.
16 total reviews
Comment from Neonewman
I loved the opening statement. I've always viewed hospitals as like a Twilight Zone story. They always creeped me out as well; I loved it. Well done, Gretchen. Now I have to start from the beginning and see what I've missed, lol.
God bless,
Steve
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I loved the opening statement. I've always viewed hospitals as like a Twilight Zone story. They always creeped me out as well; I loved it. Well done, Gretchen. Now I have to start from the beginning and see what I've missed, lol.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Jim Wile
I liked your description of the hospital and the transformation it takes when morning comes. It sounds like you have some experience in this realm.
Miranda is on the hunt now, seeking clues and questioning what she's finding. Her tenacity, I'm sure, will lead her to figure this out.
BTW, you mentioned Ed Preston in your previous chapter. Who is he? I either forgot or never knew.
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I liked your description of the hospital and the transformation it takes when morning comes. It sounds like you have some experience in this realm.
Miranda is on the hunt now, seeking clues and questioning what she's finding. Her tenacity, I'm sure, will lead her to figure this out.
BTW, you mentioned Ed Preston in your previous chapter. Who is he? I either forgot or never knew.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from Ric Myworld
Those Dougie types always had a tendency to make most of their own problems. As much as they deserve whatever negative things that happen to them, we still find ourselves wanting to help. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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Those Dougie types always had a tendency to make most of their own problems. As much as they deserve whatever negative things that happen to them, we still find ourselves wanting to help. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
Comment from royowen
Who would have thought that a chick that works in a roadhouse would become a detective, well,, one where the circumstances in her life have driven her into that state, her town is becoming a place of notoriety and misadventure, well done, Gretchen, blessings Roy
Typo : expect the (worse) worst?
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Who would have thought that a chick that works in a roadhouse would become a detective, well,, one where the circumstances in her life have driven her into that state, her town is becoming a place of notoriety and misadventure, well done, Gretchen, blessings Roy
Typo : expect the (worse) worst?
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Roy. In my head, Patterson County is a very safe and peaceful place ... unless you get mixed up in Miranda's world. Lol. Thank you for this. Gretchen
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Comment from patcelaw
You have a very good chapter for the book and I've enjoyed listening to it. It moves along very well when it is ready loud. You're sitting in the structure your paragraph and your punctuation. I'll make it for a very good audio read. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a wonderful year.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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You have a very good chapter for the book and I've enjoyed listening to it. It moves along very well when it is ready loud. You're sitting in the structure your paragraph and your punctuation. I'll make it for a very good audio read. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I also wish you a wonderful year.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the review and the nice wishes. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
As usual Miranda is on to something. I do hope Mitch accepts her interference with grace. LOL I agree there is a lot more to this story. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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As usual Miranda is on to something. I do hope Mitch accepts her interference with grace. LOL I agree there is a lot more to this story. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Mitch might get aggravated with her, but he knows she is wickedly smart. There will be a lot of give and take. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Miranda is on the case and it's good to hear her forensic brain at work. Meanwhile Dougie is still fighting for his life with signs of hope. This has become an intriguing murder mystery with Dougie at the heart of it and Miranda bent on solving it. Well done, Gretchen. Debbie
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Miranda is on the case and it's good to hear her forensic brain at work. Meanwhile Dougie is still fighting for his life with signs of hope. This has become an intriguing murder mystery with Dougie at the heart of it and Miranda bent on solving it. Well done, Gretchen. Debbie
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Debbie, for this wonderful review. Miranda is smart enough, but it's her tenacity that pushes her through. Gretchen
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Hmmm. You are the master of intrigue. I love the way you get my gears working, trying to be like Miranda, myself, and work this through. So many unanswered questions and potential scenarios. I repeat: you are the master of intrigue. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!! xoxo
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Hmmm. You are the master of intrigue. I love the way you get my gears working, trying to be like Miranda, myself, and work this through. So many unanswered questions and potential scenarios. I repeat: you are the master of intrigue. I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!! xoxo
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you Rachelle. There are times you remind me of Miranda (except in a more refined way.). Take it as a compliment. I love both of you. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good progress. Nicely written dialogue.
Tomlin's car have been towed off and ... - his is nitpicking, but you don't need 'off'. The message is the same without it.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Good progress. Nicely written dialogue.
Tomlin's car have been towed off and ... - his is nitpicking, but you don't need 'off'. The message is the same without it.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Wayne. I'm glad you enjoyed this and thank you for the editing help. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Bad things do happen to good people all the time and this seems to be a mystery that is hard to unravel without more clues. Another fine chapter Gretchen and we hope Duggie recovers without any serious side effects, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Bad things do happen to good people all the time and this seems to be a mystery that is hard to unravel without more clues. Another fine chapter Gretchen and we hope Duggie recovers without any serious side effects, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025
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Dougie isn't evil, he's just conceited. Lol. We all know a Dougie. Thank you for the excellent review. Gretchen
