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Danger is my business

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Most everything Mickey did was dangerous.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I am glad this is therapeutic for you. I also know it will help others reading who are in similar situation. I saw, as I read, a few areas that need a good edit. Thank you for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Another reviewers have pointed out to me my faux pas I'm
    so tired so exhausted from working with my brother I'm so happy to be here in my own little home my own little world and I just don't have the energy to change anything.
Comment from patcelaw
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I am very much enjoying listening to your stories of the things that you write. I know that writing is very therapeutic and I am sure that this helps you with dealing with things of the past. May you have a lovely weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    Thank you very much for your kind review
Comment from lyenochka
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I am so sorry to hear about your brother's situation! And what nuttiness to refuse a phone because of "tidiness" of a disabled person's house! I hope you complained to the phone company. Anyway, I hope he does not get on his bike. Let's pray that someone will find his phone and return it to him!
I'm glad that he is using the walking stick and enjoying the Meals on Wheels. He shouldn't use his money for all the restaurant meals as those are so expensive!
we got've to keep working at it (got)

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    We're so glad that he has accepted the Meals on Wheels. He is so surprised how much better they are from one he used to deliver them he said they are much better flavored packed everything. I even got one of my friends to begin taking meals on Wheels and she likes them soThat's good that they're doing it right now.
reply by lyenochka on 21-Nov-2024
    Good to hear!!
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    I have to go up for the 8th so I'm trying to enjoy my life until then.
reply by lyenochka on 22-Nov-2024
    💖🙏
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
    He does seem to be settling down because he can't go anywhere for a phone to buy a phone or get a phone prepare repaired. One of our officer friends gave my sister-in-law a name of a phone company that maybe just will work. She's definitely going to check into it. Thank you for following me it's nice to have that going on. You really are special to my heart, helen.
reply by lyenochka on 23-Nov-2024
    Thank you, Liz! Appreciate your friendship.
    We use Consumer Cellular and found it much less expensive than the big name cell phone companies.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2024
    I guess the one they're looking for is one that stays in the house on the table. This way he won't need to get on a bus to go have somebody try and fix his phone. Or to be financially taken taking advantage of.



    lyenochka
    16 hours agond getting you know taking and taking and gave me that in return and it was it was kind of like getting my piece of my power back in a way and just being like I have this this is mine like no one can ever you know touch this like but just my truth and my story and like that helps me sleep at night so it did help me
reply by lyenochka on 24-Nov-2024
    💖💞🙏
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Your stories about you and your brother are interesting, but they would be easier to read if you proofread them before posting. You have some run together sentences and some odd words tossed into a sentence that makes it a bit confusing.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Thank you for pointing out my full pause. Play a problem is I am so stressed out about going up to my brothers and coming home and trying to be myself that I don't really at a point care how thorough my work is. I just want to get it down.
Comment from tfawcus
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Oh, dear. This does seem like a situation that's hard to handle. Just keeping tabs on your brother is quite enough without having all that aggro from the telephone people.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    So true