Christmas Campfire
moments from two Christmas ago2 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A wonderful collection of images that truly helps bring personal memories back for the reader... a good free verse offering for the contest here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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A wonderful collection of images that truly helps bring personal memories back for the reader... a good free verse offering for the contest here! ;) Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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thanks for the feedback, and goodluck to you to.
Comment from Luke Nicholas1
What an incredibly delightful and delicious poem. The use of words is a nice collection of vocabulary that makes the reader feel like they are right beside the fire. Merry Christmas to you
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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What an incredibly delightful and delicious poem. The use of words is a nice collection of vocabulary that makes the reader feel like they are right beside the fire. Merry Christmas to you
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Thanks for the comment, do you have a fav line?
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
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Thoughts shared through the sound waves was an especially comforting. It reminds me of my family get togethers and how the cacophony of happy sounds of people talking and visiting Karma my grandma chasing all the grandchildren around and them screaming and laughing, music playing in the background. But with all of that happening you can almost feel the singularity of thought which is that there is nowhere that anyone wants to be more than right where we are
