Reviews from
Feeling beloved.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This poem is wonderful to read. You share emotion in just a few words! I love how you share the feeling of love from just a glance. That is so powerful. Keep writing more of these wonderful little gems!
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
Comment from
phoegon
I like this poem and its direction. However, I think the middle line could be reworked a little bit. The first and last lines are easy for me to feel and connect with on the emotion level of being with someone, but the second line trips me up.
Comment Written 02-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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