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Tender...

Feeling beloved.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This poem is wonderful to read. You share emotion in just a few words! I love how you share the feeling of love from just a glance. That is so powerful. Keep writing more of these wonderful little gems!

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thanks for feedback.
Comment from phoegon
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I like this poem and its direction. However, I think the middle line could be reworked a little bit. The first and last lines are easy for me to feel and connect with on the emotion level of being with someone, but the second line trips me up.

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
    Thanks for feedback.