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Holiday and Holyday Poetry

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religious and holiday poetry

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Hello there and I hope you are enjoying a lovely afternoon. As I was reading, I related to so many of your descriptions of childhood Halloweens. It was a fun loving event that somehow has seemed to change. Well done.

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    HI Melissa, thank you for your commentsand review. Dove
Comment from patcelaw
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This is well written in at Reeds well when it is read aloud, I enjoyed listening to it very much. Your contrast on your background and your font color is not enough contrast for me to be able to comfortably read it with my eyes. But I can still get the message by listening to it. Patricia.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Hi Patricia, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from jessizero
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This was a great collection of Halloween memories for the poetry contest. I loved your rhymes! Your formatting was festive, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Hi jessizero, thanks for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from mermaids
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Your words capture the essence of Halloween
I do not think you have left anything out. "Full moon's eerie glow" is a vivid use of words that creates a Halloween scene. This is a good entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2024
    Hi mermaids, thank you for your comments and review. Dove