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Procrastination

Idle minds

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Comment from lyenochka
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Brilliant use of personification! I liked even your choice of verb as the "pecks away at me" gives that clear feeling that the idleness is making the narrator feel guilty. Congratulations on your second place win!!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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LOL. This is a cute contest entry. One of my sons, Andrew, use to procrastinate with his schoolwork. He always got it done but would wait until the last minute. That upset me. His comment to me, "Mom, you know I'm going to do it, so why let it bother you?" Thank you for sharing then entry with us. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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Sometimes being idle is very distressful for us and we feel like things are packing away at us when we are idle I wish you the very best of all of your writing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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Made me think of a chicken...peck peck peck. If you sit to long in one place, it could happen. LOL You fit the requirements for the contest and I shall wish you luck.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2024