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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The image you painted with your words in this poem is fantastic. That shows a command of the language. This is an extra special poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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The image you painted with your words in this poem is fantastic. That shows a command of the language. This is an extra special poem. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from RJ Heritage
The writer here seems to be interpreting the unspoken dream of the sleeper, or the one she is focused on. Of course, the nature of dreams is that they are given to quick change, but are often based on our desires or things we yearn for.
Nice one.
RJ
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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The writer here seems to be interpreting the unspoken dream of the sleeper, or the one she is focused on. Of course, the nature of dreams is that they are given to quick change, but are often based on our desires or things we yearn for.
Nice one.
RJ
Comment Written 30-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy, and
I don't want to brag, but I've fathered six children in my dreams. Of course, they5 all grown and are much too busy to pick up the phone and call!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy, and
I don't want to brag, but I've fathered six children in my dreams. Of course, they5 all grown and are much too busy to pick up the phone and call!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Haha. To bad, you would be a great father.... funny, intelligent, talented, and a Democrat! LoL
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Thank you, Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
cool and fun imagery of riding the moon to a land of dreams to dance on stars!!
smooth quick read - and totally fun!
great pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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cool and fun imagery of riding the moon to a land of dreams to dance on stars!!
smooth quick read - and totally fun!
great pics and colours, too
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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A reviewer told me it was scary to look behind the eyes.... lol
Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from Neonewman
It seems this is an excellent expression of love. Looking behind someone's eyes can be scary as well. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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It seems this is an excellent expression of love. Looking behind someone's eyes can be scary as well. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve. The looking behind your eyes is not literally but poeticly.
Gypsy hugs 🙂
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My pleasure.
Comment from BOO ghost
Nice title name. BOO appreciates the author footnotes! It's another eye-pleasing presentation. I sense that your tank is full of ideas. Doubt you will ever experience writer's block. You pump out poems like a bunch of sunflower seeds blowing into the wind. to the whimsical land of dreams
where we dance with wishing stars.
Oh, like that word, whimsical. Oh, another beauty!
BOO!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Nice title name. BOO appreciates the author footnotes! It's another eye-pleasing presentation. I sense that your tank is full of ideas. Doubt you will ever experience writer's block. You pump out poems like a bunch of sunflower seeds blowing into the wind. to the whimsical land of dreams
where we dance with wishing stars.
Oh, like that word, whimsical. Oh, another beauty!
BOO!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Boo.
Gypsy hugs 🙂
Comment from lyenochka
Love how you bring the music of love into this poem with "dance with wishing stars to the beat of our yearning hearts." What a beautiful way to show us the two-part activity that love is!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Love how you bring the music of love into this poem with "dance with wishing stars to the beat of our yearning hearts." What a beautiful way to show us the two-part activity that love is!
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very mBOO. Big Sister
Love 🙂 ❤️
Marival
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good form that you have written for a contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Wonderful day. God bless have a wonderful week Patricia.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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This is a very good form that you have written for a contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. Wonderful day. God bless have a wonderful week Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
Gypsy hugs 🙂