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Comment from gansach
As always, your presentation is beautiful. Your color choices reflect the feelings expressed. Your imagery is excellent and Senryu rules have been complied with perfectly. I enjoyed it very much!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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As always, your presentation is beautiful. Your color choices reflect the feelings expressed. Your imagery is excellent and Senryu rules have been complied with perfectly. I enjoyed it very much!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gansach
Gypsy 😊
Comment from mermaids
Emotions and feelings come forth from your words. "I drown deeply in the pain of loving you from a distance" is a wonderful use of words that most of us can relate to. You have a light feel and you take the reader to an almost mystical realm with your words. I also like the variety of colors for each verse.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Emotions and feelings come forth from your words. "I drown deeply in the pain of loving you from a distance" is a wonderful use of words that most of us can relate to. You have a light feel and you take the reader to an almost mystical realm with your words. I also like the variety of colors for each verse.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, mermaids.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
Gypsy, this is an excellent sentry. The remembrance and the longing are present clearly throughout for your lost love. I love your figurative language, especially the metaphors.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Gypsy, this is an excellent sentry. The remembrance and the longing are present clearly throughout for your lost love. I love your figurative language, especially the metaphors.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Verna.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Ah, you've captured that moment when sunrise seems to replace the night with your line "I feel the pale-tempered dawn rise as the moonlight falls".
The difference in terrain must allude to the different spaces you live in; aurora lights must have been a time that you shared.
I haven't read your poetry in a while, but I remember that the presentations are always beautiful and the words cause me to pause and think about what I'm reading.
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Ah, you've captured that moment when sunrise seems to replace the night with your line "I feel the pale-tempered dawn rise as the moonlight falls".
The difference in terrain must allude to the different spaces you live in; aurora lights must have been a time that you shared.
I haven't read your poetry in a while, but I remember that the presentations are always beautiful and the words cause me to pause and think about what I'm reading.
Thanks for sharing your poetry with us.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Pam.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
What beautiful imagery and matching words, full of poignant love and sadness for a loss. You've drawn the reader to the window and they too can feel and see your words.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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What beautiful imagery and matching words, full of poignant love and sadness for a loss. You've drawn the reader to the window and they too can feel and see your words.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Carol.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Brenda Strauser
A beautiful poem. Very descriptive and well written. The pictures are also beautiful. The different colors used in writing is very creative. Great job.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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A beautiful poem. Very descriptive and well written. The pictures are also beautiful. The different colors used in writing is very creative. Great job.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Brenda
Gypsy hugs 😊
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Thank you for the gypsy hugs
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was one of those poems that make you see things in an almost kaleidoscope way. The colors and richness of the imagery was strong. I enjoyed your poem. Great writing. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This was one of those poems that make you see things in an almost kaleidoscope way. The colors and richness of the imagery was strong. I enjoyed your poem. Great writing. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from lyenochka
Lovely pictures! I especially liked "I get lost in our forests of my evergreens" and "aurora lights carry nostalgic seeds blooming in my eyes".
You captured the feeling of longing well.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Lovely pictures! I especially liked "I get lost in our forests of my evergreens" and "aurora lights carry nostalgic seeds blooming in my eyes".
You captured the feeling of longing well.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love 😊
Marival
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A poignant verse of separation/loss and an emotional outpouring of inner turmoil as memories are recalled. Beautifully presented with a meditative tone in your senryu suite. Well done, Gypsy! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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A poignant verse of separation/loss and an emotional outpouring of inner turmoil as memories are recalled. Beautifully presented with a meditative tone in your senryu suite. Well done, Gypsy! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Neonewman
This is a Beautifully-crafted,Gypsy. We all have a window to our soul. Some can be see clearly, but most are buried by high walls. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is a Beautifully-crafted,Gypsy. We all have a window to our soul. Some can be see clearly, but most are buried by high walls. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Steve, bless you too.
Gypsy hugs
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My pleasure, Gypsy.