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Comment from teafor2
Gypsy, all these wonderfully personiforcations are made by and via the will
of God...You and your talented pen are blessed to have the insight to create such enthralling verbiage...Write on! teafor2
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Gypsy, all these wonderfully personiforcations are made by and via the will
of God...You and your talented pen are blessed to have the insight to create such enthralling verbiage...Write on! teafor2
Comment Written 16-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, my friend.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Great pictures! When I read your refrain of "nobody loves me better", I can't help but think of how much God loves us. And we know that no human love can compare to His perfect love.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Great pictures! When I read your refrain of "nobody loves me better", I can't help but think of how much God loves us. And we know that no human love can compare to His perfect love.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Yes, I was thinking of God and how imperfect I am but He loves me anyway. I edited a little this morning. The sentence composition was confusing, hopefully is better now.
Thank you very much, big sister.
love
marival
Comment from shelley kaye
the woman in the second pic looks like she's have fun splashing around in the water lol
this was a great, very positive free verse with nice imagery and a hopeful feel and a smooth flow of words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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the woman in the second pic looks like she's have fun splashing around in the water lol
this was a great, very positive free verse with nice imagery and a hopeful feel and a smooth flow of words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder of how much God loves us. Yes, He's provided all these things and more for our pleasure. Yet, we often forget to thank Him for that. Your presentation is a beautiful reminder of that.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you for sharing this wonderful reminder of how much God loves us. Yes, He's provided all these things and more for our pleasure. Yet, we often forget to thank Him for that. Your presentation is a beautiful reminder of that.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy
Comment from gansach
This is a beautiful free verse poem and, as always, your outstanding presentation that enhances your expression of emotion. I enjoyed it very much. You always produce such a wonderful work.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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This is a beautiful free verse poem and, as always, your outstanding presentation that enhances your expression of emotion. I enjoyed it very much. You always produce such a wonderful work.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Gansach
Gypsy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I love the nautical feel to this. The marshes and the tides. All something I'm familiar with living here on the coast. I like how you tied God into the natural flow and settings. Beautifully written. Gretchen
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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I love the nautical feel to this. The marshes and the tides. All something I'm familiar with living here on the coast. I like how you tied God into the natural flow and settings. Beautifully written. Gretchen
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Marival,
I love the 'higher' quality you delivered through your title refrain of 'nobody loves me better'. Just that phrase conjurer's up the connection to the energies we all belong to... and well you know me so well and even used one of my old head shots to pretty up your delivery. (Yeah, sure!:))) Okay, I've never looked that enticing, but I do hold my own quality of attraction if rugged comes into play.
For me you have hit all my connections to Mother Earth and have not neglected to add the light and dark shades of emotion that all of your above poem alludes to with such a deft touch within your imagery.
I absolutely love the verse you wrapped this free verse up with... it has
el poder de la Reina Lobo Gitana dentro de tu esencia!
Attention to detail as always delivers the best of composition and presentation... magic!
Beautiful-beautiful-beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
la pureza de la conexión con la esencia de nosotras.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Hi Marival,
I love the 'higher' quality you delivered through your title refrain of 'nobody loves me better'. Just that phrase conjurer's up the connection to the energies we all belong to... and well you know me so well and even used one of my old head shots to pretty up your delivery. (Yeah, sure!:))) Okay, I've never looked that enticing, but I do hold my own quality of attraction if rugged comes into play.
For me you have hit all my connections to Mother Earth and have not neglected to add the light and dark shades of emotion that all of your above poem alludes to with such a deft touch within your imagery.
I absolutely love the verse you wrapped this free verse up with... it has
el poder de la Reina Lobo Gitana dentro de tu esencia!
Attention to detail as always delivers the best of composition and presentation... magic!
Beautiful-beautiful-beautiful!
With our thoughts we create...
la pureza de la conexión con la esencia de nosotras.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Hola, Jaime,
I'm happy to hear from you. Thank you for being so kind to me. You understand me and my poems so well.... it's an honor to get an exceptional six stars review and detailed feedback. May you and Jade have a wonderful weekend.
BTW... I like rugged men. LoL
Con cariño, amigo mio
Marival
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a meaningful poem. Jesus is every bit the descriptions you mentioned in the poem. If He can walk on water, He can do almost anything! He is powerful.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Such a meaningful poem. Jesus is every bit the descriptions you mentioned in the poem. If He can walk on water, He can do almost anything! He is powerful.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much for, have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I certainly do attest to the fact that whatever I might be, the love of Jesus Christ is for me. He came not for the perfect, I know there is none, but for the world of the imperfect. Thus is seen clearly in your words.
Thank for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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I certainly do attest to the fact that whatever I might be, the love of Jesus Christ is for me. He came not for the perfect, I know there is none, but for the world of the imperfect. Thus is seen clearly in your words.
Thank for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
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You're welcome.
Have a great weekend yourself.
RJ
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You're welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written and it has a powerful message. I enjoyed listening to it very much and it has a beautiful presentation. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. God bless. Pat.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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This is very well written and it has a powerful message. I enjoyed listening to it very much and it has a beautiful presentation. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. God bless. Pat.
Comment Written 14-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Pat. Have a great weekend.
Gypsy
