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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is stunning both in the visual and so beautiful written. The setting the sun fights to stay alive.
Splendid writing.
I enjoyed this Haiku.
Best wishes

 Comment Written 31-May-2024

reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    Thank you very much~ I appreciate your excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.

    Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
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I think the sun like a lot of us do wish it could stay a lot longer, though then I guess we may not get to view the beautiful sunsets, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-May-2024

reply by the author on 31-May-2024
    Thank you very much, kym

    Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
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Thanks for sharing.
I've seen some amazing sunsets as well as sunrises.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It opens up the imagination with your artworks.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you very much, ricky

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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I guess the sunset is symbolic of death - it is the fall of the sun down the horizon, and it's the death of a single day. But it's a spectacular sunset which is indeed "breathtaking".

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister.

    Love

    marival

Comment from RJ Heritage
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Beautifully written and illustrated. The eye is quickly drawn to the flaming sunset. The verses are eye catching as well in their vivid golden-yellow and orange- red colors. Combined they create a very stunning imagery.
RJ

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
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love the image of a fiery sunset taking its last breath!
great imagery in a great haiku with smooth flow

thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 27-May-2024

reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy
Comment from jessizero
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This personification of the sunset was lovely and creative. You used your descriptive words well. I also loved your colors and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2024

reply by the author on 28-May-2024
    Thank you very much,

    Gypsy