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Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is stunning both in the visual and so beautiful written. The setting the sun fights to stay alive.
Splendid writing.
I enjoyed this Haiku.
Best wishes
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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This is stunning both in the visual and so beautiful written. The setting the sun fights to stay alive.
Splendid writing.
I enjoyed this Haiku.
Best wishes
Comment Written 31-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much~ I appreciate your excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
I think the sun like a lot of us do wish it could stay a lot longer, though then I guess we may not get to view the beautiful sunsets, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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I think the sun like a lot of us do wish it could stay a lot longer, though then I guess we may not get to view the beautiful sunsets, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-May-2024
reply by the author on 31-May-2024
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Thank you very much, kym
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
Thanks for sharing.
I've seen some amazing sunsets as well as sunrises.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It opens up the imagination with your artworks.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thanks for sharing.
I've seen some amazing sunsets as well as sunrises.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It opens up the imagination with your artworks.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you very much, ricky
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I guess the sunset is symbolic of death - it is the fall of the sun down the horizon, and it's the death of a single day. But it's a spectacular sunset which is indeed "breathtaking".
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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I guess the sunset is symbolic of death - it is the fall of the sun down the horizon, and it's the death of a single day. But it's a spectacular sunset which is indeed "breathtaking".
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister.
Love
marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Beautifully written and illustrated. The eye is quickly drawn to the flaming sunset. The verses are eye catching as well in their vivid golden-yellow and orange- red colors. Combined they create a very stunning imagery.
RJ
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Beautifully written and illustrated. The eye is quickly drawn to the flaming sunset. The verses are eye catching as well in their vivid golden-yellow and orange- red colors. Combined they create a very stunning imagery.
RJ
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
love the image of a fiery sunset taking its last breath!
great imagery in a great haiku with smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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love the image of a fiery sunset taking its last breath!
great imagery in a great haiku with smooth flow
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy
Comment from jessizero
This personification of the sunset was lovely and creative. You used your descriptive words well. I also loved your colors and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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This personification of the sunset was lovely and creative. You used your descriptive words well. I also loved your colors and formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy