Shattered
A minute poem about unrequited love2 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written for the contest and I wish you a very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day. I like the essence of the poem very much. Have a good day. Patricia .
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This is very well written for the contest and I wish you a very best in the contest. May you have a lovely day. I like the essence of the poem very much. Have a good day. Patricia .
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
I have just read the rules of the competition and I can understand why you did not pick up on the rules. The Minute poem had to have a syllable count, did not need to be written in iambic meter but did have to rhyme. The way it was worded made it difficult to understand. I took it to mean rhyme scheme, but it actually says a rhyme, yours does have that battered and shattered. I am giving this a five it is a good poem, not a traditional Minute poem but it is good. Good Luck
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I have just read the rules of the competition and I can understand why you did not pick up on the rules. The Minute poem had to have a syllable count, did not need to be written in iambic meter but did have to rhyme. The way it was worded made it difficult to understand. I took it to mean rhyme scheme, but it actually says a rhyme, yours does have that battered and shattered. I am giving this a five it is a good poem, not a traditional Minute poem but it is good. Good Luck
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
