Saltwater Ghosts
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Letters"Young girl with special abilities.
13 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is so good. It is really not my type of story, yet I am pulled in by this little girl. There are more everyday adventures for her I am sure. Have a good week. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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This is so good. It is really not my type of story, yet I am pulled in by this little girl. There are more everyday adventures for her I am sure. Have a good week. Karen
Comment Written 29-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm glad Heddy could pull you in. Gretchen
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I'm glad Heddy told Nonni, it's always easier to share something that bothers you, and being a child, that is important. I'm wondering what the man's secret is. Being scared means it's something bad. Another excellent chapter, my friend! :))Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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I'm glad Heddy told Nonni, it's always easier to share something that bothers you, and being a child, that is important. I'm wondering what the man's secret is. Being scared means it's something bad. Another excellent chapter, my friend! :))Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2024
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Well, he might be running from something. Heddy, being eleven probably doesn't know but a few emotions. I don't even know why he's there. I'm finding out with Heddy. Lol. Thanks for this. Gretchen
Comment from Ric Myworld
You do such a great job of describing the Island, the wind, and the smell, making an ol' beach bum surfer fill right at home. Thanks for another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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You do such a great job of describing the Island, the wind, and the smell, making an ol' beach bum surfer fill right at home. Thanks for another fine chapter.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2024
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Thanks so much, Ric. There is no smell like the ocean, that's for sure. Glad you enjoyed it. Gretchen
Comment from Sankey
This is a nice little tale, full of all sorts of dreams and imaginations. You are doing well. I think you said Hedda is 11 or 12? Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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This is a nice little tale, full of all sorts of dreams and imaginations. You are doing well. I think you said Hedda is 11 or 12? Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. You made my day! Gretchen
Comment from T B Botts
Gretchen,
I'm loving this story. I found it interesting that Nonni doesn't tell Heddy what to do. She's wise with a wisdom that comes from years of life on this earth, and even if she knows what the future might hold, she is letting Heddy learn for herself. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Gretchen,
I'm loving this story. I found it interesting that Nonni doesn't tell Heddy what to do. She's wise with a wisdom that comes from years of life on this earth, and even if she knows what the future might hold, she is letting Heddy learn for herself. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 03-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Tom. It means so much that you like this. Gretchen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent story about children's emotions. I like the relationship between Nonni and Heddy. Good character development. I wonder what will happen next. It's a very engaging plot. Well done! You are an exceptional story teller.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Excellent story about children's emotions. I like the relationship between Nonni and Heddy. Good character development. I wonder what will happen next. It's a very engaging plot. Well done! You are an exceptional story teller.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm so happy you like it. Gretchen
Comment from damommy
Heddy seems a wise little girl. Luckily, she has her Nonni to visit at the right time she needs her. I'm looking forward to more of her stories. Very well written.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Heddy seems a wise little girl. Luckily, she has her Nonni to visit at the right time she needs her. I'm looking forward to more of her stories. Very well written.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much. I'm so glad you like this. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This story continues to delight me. Heddy is such a unique child and is good at keeping secrets. Whether she should keep the frightened man's secret remains to be seen. I'm looking forward to the next installment. "Slow to answer the whys" probably shouldn't have the apostophe.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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This story continues to delight me. Heddy is such a unique child and is good at keeping secrets. Whether she should keep the frightened man's secret remains to be seen. I'm looking forward to the next installment. "Slow to answer the whys" probably shouldn't have the apostophe.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Carol. I'll fix that edit shortly. I was back and forth with it. Lol. I appreciate the nice comments . Gretchen
Comment from Wendy G
Wonderful insights into children's feelings and fears. Lovely relationship with Nonni. I'm curious to find out more about the man, sounds like he's a fugitive.
Wendy
Edit: "... and to breath this good air." (breathe)
cream colored stationary (stationery)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Wonderful insights into children's feelings and fears. Lovely relationship with Nonni. I'm curious to find out more about the man, sounds like he's a fugitive.
Wendy
Edit: "... and to breath this good air." (breathe)
cream colored stationary (stationery)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you, Wendy. I'm glad you liked this. Gretchen
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A lovely chapter in which Heddy is caught in her ambivalence between her spiritual relationship with Nonni and the less gratifying real world of home. Your story is evolving beautifully and intriguingly with evocative detail of the setting and a mystery yet to be unfolded. The reader feels safe in the knowledge that Heddy will be guided to some extent by Nonni in her quest for answers. Small edit - station(e)ry. Thanks for sharing, Gretchen. Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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A lovely chapter in which Heddy is caught in her ambivalence between her spiritual relationship with Nonni and the less gratifying real world of home. Your story is evolving beautifully and intriguingly with evocative detail of the setting and a mystery yet to be unfolded. The reader feels safe in the knowledge that Heddy will be guided to some extent by Nonni in her quest for answers. Small edit - station(e)ry. Thanks for sharing, Gretchen. Debbie
Comment Written 01-Jan-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2024
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Thank you so much, Debbie. I appreciate the help and the review. Gretchen