One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The deepest sorrow is felt when someone we love leaves us and we believe our love was all for nothing as it fades into our memory, just a whisper in the breeze of time, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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The deepest sorrow is felt when someone we love leaves us and we believe our love was all for nothing as it fades into our memory, just a whisper in the breeze of time, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from karenina
Yes....oh yes. Nothingness would be a gift, Gypsy. So many of us cling to what might have been...or worse, what we believed was true only to find out one of us was committed. These fractures in our hearts never truly completely heal. What a thoughtful free verse. (And brilliantly presented, as always!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Yes....oh yes. Nothingness would be a gift, Gypsy. So many of us cling to what might have been...or worse, what we believed was true only to find out one of us was committed. These fractures in our hearts never truly completely heal. What a thoughtful free verse. (And brilliantly presented, as always!)
Karenina
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you, sweet karenina. I'm happy that you understand my free verse poem so well. I appreciate the insightful and kind review.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Always great to read your work!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very good free verse poem. I enjoyed listening to it. I do wish that you have a very good day. I just had surgery yesterday to have my gallbladder removed and I'm doing well today. Patricia
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is a very good free verse poem. I enjoyed listening to it. I do wish that you have a very good day. I just had surgery yesterday to have my gallbladder removed and I'm doing well today. Patricia
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Oh, I wish you a fast recovery. Thank you, Patricia. You are very kind.
Gypsy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is well done and would have done well in the betrayal contest for poetry. I love the artwork and your use of metaphor and simile to portray your lost relationship with someone you loved very much. This speaks for all of us who have lost someone close to us. It is hard and takes a long time to heal.
Jesse
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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This is well done and would have done well in the betrayal contest for poetry. I love the artwork and your use of metaphor and simile to portray your lost relationship with someone you loved very much. This speaks for all of us who have lost someone close to us. It is hard and takes a long time to heal.
Jesse
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Jesse, you are the second person that mentions the Betrayal contest.
I appreciate your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs. :)
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Yes, Gypsy, you missed out on the contest about betrayal. You're welcome, my friend, for the review.
Thanks for the hugs!
Jesse
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a sad story about our love of life. Please keep looking and I want you find love again before everything turns into nothingness. But you have a lovely grand son whom you can pour your love to.
Excellent.
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What a sad story about our love of life. Please keep looking and I want you find love again before everything turns into nothingness. But you have a lovely grand son whom you can pour your love to.
Excellent.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from June Sargent
With betrayal, forgetfulness can't come soon enough. Your free verse captured the pain and agony of love snatched away suddenly. Leaving memories that will hopefully disappear like the mist at dawn. Beautiful piece!
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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With betrayal, forgetfulness can't come soon enough. Your free verse captured the pain and agony of love snatched away suddenly. Leaving memories that will hopefully disappear like the mist at dawn. Beautiful piece!
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and one about the deepest, darkest despair and yet gives a person hope at the end. We all need a happy ending, something to look forward to
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and one about the deepest, darkest despair and yet gives a person hope at the end. We all need a happy ending, something to look forward to
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. Betrayal speaks volumes, your words have the essence of that speech. Very well done and sadly yet greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This was a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. Betrayal speaks volumes, your words have the essence of that speech. Very well done and sadly yet greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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So welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Long lost love poem. The black background does look rich on this poem. Your words are very captivating. The imagery presentation is always great on your poetry.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Long lost love poem. The black background does look rich on this poem. Your words are very captivating. The imagery presentation is always great on your poetry.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This emotional poem describes love lost either by death or abandonment. Both are horrible. Thank you for sharing this with us. This poem is extremely well written, and you've provided us with a complete package.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This emotional poem describes love lost either by death or abandonment. Both are horrible. Thank you for sharing this with us. This poem is extremely well written, and you've provided us with a complete package.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy hugs