One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
This poem seems inspired by the painting by Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec, with each line suggesting an aspect of the painting, and the Atticus quote also explains this poem.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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This poem seems inspired by the painting by Henri de Toulouse-Lautrec, with each line suggesting an aspect of the painting, and the Atticus quote also explains this poem.
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you very much, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
Well, I got lost within these words, so I can see why 'I get lost in you'. Baby it's getting hot in here... hmmm hot in there? Just know there's a lot of heat coming from the thoughts of.
Tangled in your seashore scent from last night's mischievousness.
There's not a verse out of place and a place where the verse does not lead one straight to the beauty within its intent.
Enveloped inside your warm embrace my body is hot and ready to make the morning last...
If I was to write down everything that stirred my fancy within this free verse poem, I would be only rewriting what you have so wonderfully composed and posted.
But...
Your beautiful body entwined with mine fits so well... my jigsaw puzzle piece.
Don't know if you can hear... I'm reading this with my deepest voice.
Outstanding!
With our thoughts we create...
a perfect fit.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
Well, I got lost within these words, so I can see why 'I get lost in you'. Baby it's getting hot in here... hmmm hot in there? Just know there's a lot of heat coming from the thoughts of.
Tangled in your seashore scent from last night's mischievousness.
There's not a verse out of place and a place where the verse does not lead one straight to the beauty within its intent.
Enveloped inside your warm embrace my body is hot and ready to make the morning last...
If I was to write down everything that stirred my fancy within this free verse poem, I would be only rewriting what you have so wonderfully composed and posted.
But...
Your beautiful body entwined with mine fits so well... my jigsaw puzzle piece.
Don't know if you can hear... I'm reading this with my deepest voice.
Outstanding!
With our thoughts we create...
a perfect fit.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 12-May-2023
reply by the author on 12-May-2023
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Hello, James,
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
It's always wonderful to hear from you. Your feedback is insightful and detailed and makes me happy to know that my words meant something to you.
I hope you are healthy and joyful.
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"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." ? Maya Angelou
Comment from June Sargent
This free verse is the opposite of the one you penned entitled Soon. Nothing can separate these two lovers who fit together like a jigsaw puzzle. Great imagery and beautiful artwork. Well done.
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This free verse is the opposite of the one you penned entitled Soon. Nothing can separate these two lovers who fit together like a jigsaw puzzle. Great imagery and beautiful artwork. Well done.
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Ricky1024
This was well written rich in theme and imagery
To totally give yourself to another human being doesn't matter to age the race or the sex.
Is a commitment for life.
Basically that is what you have presented my dear Gypsy Blue Rose.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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This was well written rich in theme and imagery
To totally give yourself to another human being doesn't matter to age the race or the sex.
Is a commitment for life.
Basically that is what you have presented my dear Gypsy Blue Rose.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 11-May-2023
reply by the author on 11-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Ricky. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from karenina
Whoo! Is it warm in here or is it your steamy romantic free verse? Very nice, Gypsy! You give us proof positive that passion has no expiration date... What you leave to the imagination is the most intimate mystery solved! Oh, what sweet relief when we find our other half!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Whoo! Is it warm in here or is it your steamy romantic free verse? Very nice, Gypsy! You give us proof positive that passion has no expiration date... What you leave to the imagination is the most intimate mystery solved! Oh, what sweet relief when we find our other half!
Karenina
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Yes, finding our other half is the best. Unfortunately, I never had. I thought I did but not for him. Maybe in the next life. All my love poems come from my imagination and from memories.
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Thank you very much, Karenina, is always a pleasure to hear from you
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Whoever he was, he missed the best blessing ever! You, my friend, are a gem!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Once again, very romantic and very sensual, yet innocent. I like the way you described the scene and the emotion. Wonderfully written. A complete package, once again.
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Once again, very romantic and very sensual, yet innocent. I like the way you described the scene and the emotion. Wonderfully written. A complete package, once again.
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you, Barbara, it means a lot coming from you.
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----one the caused my mind to legglessly return to happier times whose memory is fading due to non-practice, at least with someone else!
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----one the caused my mind to legglessly return to happier times whose memory is fading due to non-practice, at least with someone else!
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. I really loved your dual pictures, the one that depicts the lovers beneath the sheets and the flower. You expressed your words in a delightful way of truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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This was a fantastic free verse, Gypsy. I really loved your dual pictures, the one that depicts the lovers beneath the sheets and the flower. You expressed your words in a delightful way of truth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The presentation is very romantic looking. The verses are effective in imagery; good conclusive lines in every verse. Very descriptive indeed. You have written a free verse, which is very lovely.
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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The presentation is very romantic looking. The verses are effective in imagery; good conclusive lines in every verse. Very descriptive indeed. You have written a free verse, which is very lovely.
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sensual write here and I expect you are very much in love with someone close to you as your posts detail a close loving encounter, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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A sensual write here and I expect you are very much in love with someone close to you as your posts detail a close loving encounter, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 09-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs