One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Janel Mock
You never fail to amaze me! I love how you describe the upper for something I can see, second I can see and feel/relate to, and the third I full on feel that! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
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You never fail to amaze me! I love how you describe the upper for something I can see, second I can see and feel/relate to, and the third I full on feel that! Thank you for sharing! ~Janel
Comment Written 05-May-2023
reply by the author on 05-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi MariVal,
This kojiki is done well. It shows the relationship growing from the beginning until marriage.
I like that the font matches the changing of the sunset/sunrise colors in the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Hi MariVal,
This kojiki is done well. It shows the relationship growing from the beginning until marriage.
I like that the font matches the changing of the sunset/sunrise colors in the artwork.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you very much for the positive review and feedback. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome on all accounts, MariVal.
Joan
Comment from royowen
I love the presentation Gypsy, you always frame your poetry so well. I'm going to have to learn these things, this is a magnificent presentation, and very worthy content, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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I love the presentation Gypsy, you always frame your poetry so well. I'm going to have to learn these things, this is a magnificent presentation, and very worthy content, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you very much for the positive review and feedback. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Funny. I did not find the kigo in this poem. As hard as I tried I could not see the reference to a season whether winter summer spring or fall. Otherwise, I loved the pirouettes of the woman in a red flowing dress. You chose the picture to go along with this poem well.
This sounds like a love festival of renewal and I would like to think this is happening in real life. Thanks for sharing as always.
Jesse
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Funny. I did not find the kigo in this poem. As hard as I tried I could not see the reference to a season whether winter summer spring or fall. Otherwise, I loved the pirouettes of the woman in a red flowing dress. You chose the picture to go along with this poem well.
This sounds like a love festival of renewal and I would like to think this is happening in real life. Thanks for sharing as always.
Jesse
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Hi Jesse, the season is summer because the wind is warm. For kigo (season word) it doesn't have to be the season spelled out... summer, autumn, winter or spring. It's usually implied.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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The wind is warm could be in spring as well as summer.
Thanks for the Gypsy hugs.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is incredibly beautiful, Marival. I like everything about it.
I wish I could join your Japanese poetry club, but unfortunately I have no time. Maybe in the summer.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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This is incredibly beautiful, Marival. I like everything about it.
I wish I could join your Japanese poetry club, but unfortunately I have no time. Maybe in the summer.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I really enjoyed reading this superb romance. I am positive that all of us when we first fell in love felt as if we were 'speeding out of control'. I know I did.
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I really enjoyed reading this superb romance. I am positive that all of us when we first fell in love felt as if we were 'speeding out of control'. I know I did.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely done for the Club event. I enjoyed it it's presented beautifully and it flows well. How do you hope you have a wonderful day. May God bless you and your writing. Patricia
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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This is a nicely done for the Club event. I enjoyed it it's presented beautifully and it flows well. How do you hope you have a wonderful day. May God bless you and your writing. Patricia
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Gypsy, this poem has love written throughout the entire three verses. Love makes the world go round.
I must ask you, how is the writer's strike where you live; any of it affect your writing?
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Gypsy, this poem has love written throughout the entire three verses. Love makes the world go round.
I must ask you, how is the writer's strike where you live; any of it affect your writing?
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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The strike is all over the country, as far as I know. I hope the writers win. It doesn't affect me.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
i don't like being spun lol
don't like spinny rides either LOL
anyway, this was a really fun kojiki
love the second stanza! speeding out of control LOL
liked all the different colours - like a rainbow of love
great work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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i don't like being spun lol
don't like spinny rides either LOL
anyway, this was a really fun kojiki
love the second stanza! speeding out of control LOL
liked all the different colours - like a rainbow of love
great work!
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was indeed a wonderful Kojiki poem, Gypsy. You presented this as a musical dance which was rather creative of you. The dual picture were equally done. Blessed Be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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This was indeed a wonderful Kojiki poem, Gypsy. You presented this as a musical dance which was rather creative of you. The dual picture were equally done. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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So very welcome, Gypsy.