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One Thousand Cranes

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this passionate poem with us. Yes, after many years of marriage love and passion is still alive and well. I enjoyed reading this poem. The presentation was perfect.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This a lovely and so romantic poem that, after many years together, he affirms he still loves her and still finds her attractive.
This is so intimate and captivating.
Best wishes,
Mary

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Exceptional
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What a moving love poem for these lovely couple. It's so beautiful that their love has lasted a life time. We should celebrate that.

I'm in Milan, Italy for my son's art show.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback. Milan for your son's art show? That sounds wonderful. Have great trip!

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
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wait... didn't i already review this? i remember the pinned and bites... weird... okay, well, more points and funny-money LOL

nice choka with smooth flow
cool pics and colour presentation

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    LoL. You did. I had to repost this because somehow it got posted to a book for judiverse, her husband just died. My poem is very inappropriate for that. Thank God Helen noticed.

    I don't know how that happened... so weird. LoL

    Thank you, again.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by shelley kaye on 24-Apr-2023
    i did notice it was in the book- but i just thought you put it there lol
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    No, I'm so embarrassed, I hope not too many people saw it.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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A romantic poem about someone you have loved. The words are very captivating and romantic. To have and to hold from this day forward brings to mind, their wedding day.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 24-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much, rosemary.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from patcelaw
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After many years of true love, many men will show that loved to their woman, and she will submit, Accepting his advances of love. I enjoyed this very much. Patricia.

 Comment Written 23-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs