One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
A love poem for the food lover with an exceptionally sweet sweet tooth. Not sure if this was intended to be humorous, but it gave me a chuckle. My kind of kiss.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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A love poem for the food lover with an exceptionally sweet sweet tooth. Not sure if this was intended to be humorous, but it gave me a chuckle. My kind of kiss.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Ginda, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
Very nicely written poem I do hope that you have a wonderful Easter and then you will keep writing and sharing your lovely work with us. God bless Patricia.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Very nicely written poem I do hope that you have a wonderful Easter and then you will keep writing and sharing your lovely work with us. God bless Patricia.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Patricia, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
How good ate you at using metaphoric descriptions of someone's body that is a great descition for these marvellous words in language most suited to poetry, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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How good ate you at using metaphoric descriptions of someone's body that is a great descition for these marvellous words in language most suited to poetry, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Roy, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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Most welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This all sounds rather delicious to me and I expect those sugar coated kisses are delivered with a box of chocolates, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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This all sounds rather delicious to me and I expect those sugar coated kisses are delivered with a box of chocolates, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend! xoxoxx
Gypsy
Comment from w.j.debi
You know how to get the pulse racing. The pool of Carmel, and chocolate-dipped berries, and cinnamon-tanned arms had me licking my lips. It sounds delicious in so many ways.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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You know how to get the pulse racing. The pool of Carmel, and chocolate-dipped berries, and cinnamon-tanned arms had me licking my lips. It sounds delicious in so many ways.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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LoL I am happy it worked for you. Being in love is sweet.
Thank you, Debi, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend!
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
This indeed was a wonderful painting by Gustav Klimt, Gypsy. There was a great deal of passion in this. The painting of 'The Kiss' was not only delightful but meaningful as well as were your words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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This indeed was a wonderful painting by Gustav Klimt, Gypsy. There was a great deal of passion in this. The painting of 'The Kiss' was not only delightful but meaningful as well as were your words. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very sensual and very innocent post. I could feel the passion as I read. It is also another perfect package you have provided or us. Thank you for taking the time to do it. It's your God given talent.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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This is a very sensual and very innocent post. I could feel the passion as I read. It is also another perfect package you have provided or us. Thank you for taking the time to do it. It's your God given talent.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Barbara,
Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem written with erotique flare,
Gypsy----gives the term 'carmel dawn' a sweet lilt-I have no fricking idea where in the Hell I thought I was going with this--never mind!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Another fine poem written with erotique flare,
Gypsy----gives the term 'carmel dawn' a sweet lilt-I have no fricking idea where in the Hell I thought I was going with this--never mind!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your free verse poem - good picture presentation -your poem has a good flow - connecting in content - eyes, lips, arms - painting a clear picture, also connecting to taste - the senses - nice - brings in many colors - and emotions - sound very tasty - Good Job AP
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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I like your free verse poem - good picture presentation -your poem has a good flow - connecting in content - eyes, lips, arms - painting a clear picture, also connecting to taste - the senses - nice - brings in many colors - and emotions - sound very tasty - Good Job AP
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This poem sounds good enough to eat; caramel, chocolate dipped berries and cinnamon tanned. Definitely bits of romance in this poem. You do well when it comes to exploring ideas.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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This poem sounds good enough to eat; caramel, chocolate dipped berries and cinnamon tanned. Definitely bits of romance in this poem. You do well when it comes to exploring ideas.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much, rosemary, for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs