One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good imagery and sensory appeal
Of special note:
rushing to the crimson sea.
(good analogy)
Well, chosen photo. Good alliteration.
Inner-feelings well expressed. Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Hi Gypsy, your poem is filled with good imagery and sensory appeal
Of special note:
rushing to the crimson sea.
(good analogy)
Well, chosen photo. Good alliteration.
Inner-feelings well expressed. Beautiful presentation. Keep the blue waters flowing. Xo. M
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
Like love, I don't think grief goes away entirely it may fade though as your wonderful poem describes it does have the habit of flaring up, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Like love, I don't think grief goes away entirely it may fade though as your wonderful poem describes it does have the habit of flaring up, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can understand how deep personal pain can build and erupt much the same as a volcano. This beautiful poem described this feeling perfectly. Once again, this complete package was perfect.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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I can understand how deep personal pain can build and erupt much the same as a volcano. This beautiful poem described this feeling perfectly. Once again, this complete package was perfect.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kindness.
gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
This was a wonderful choka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were wonderful, the first being an active volcano and the second one being a beautiful sunset. Your words brought definition to the choka. Very well done and greatly but sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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This was a wonderful choka, Gypsy. The dual pictures were wonderful, the first being an active volcano and the second one being a beautiful sunset. Your words brought definition to the choka. Very well done and greatly but sadly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kindness. Blessed be.
gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
A great choka to describe a deep personal pain which remains in the heart and mind and sometimes the emotions erupt much like a volcano. That's a great metaphor for the situation!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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A great choka to describe a deep personal pain which remains in the heart and mind and sometimes the emotions erupt much like a volcano. That's a great metaphor for the situation!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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The satori is a zen notion. Everything is interconnected it can also mean the lights of twilight are reflecting in the coffee.
Thank you very much, big sister. It's always good to hear from you.
Love,
Marival ❤️ hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your choke poem- interesting format- challenging- tells a familiar story of past memories surfacing at will - reminding us/ rekindling of deep seated issues -not ready to let go of yet- haunting us- anger and blood- good job AP
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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I like your choke poem- interesting format- challenging- tells a familiar story of past memories surfacing at will - reminding us/ rekindling of deep seated issues -not ready to let go of yet- haunting us- anger and blood- good job AP
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for the exceptional five stars review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
Your whole work, the colors, the words, and the emotions are well presented. As in any hurt, some people say "get over it," but pain sometimes never heals. You express this well.
An exceltiinal poem, Gypsy.
Good luck with all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Gypsy,
Your whole work, the colors, the words, and the emotions are well presented. As in any hurt, some people say "get over it," but pain sometimes never heals. You express this well.
An exceltiinal poem, Gypsy.
Good luck with all your writing.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from jessizero
There isn't a time limit on grief, though some people will try to convince you that there is. Your poem was colorful, which was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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There isn't a time limit on grief, though some people will try to convince you that there is. Your poem was colorful, which was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy