Bigfoot and the Fairies
fantasy15 total reviews
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is a lovely gorgeous poem and I think the pictures pretty cool too!
It's fun to write about You're right about fanciful things Mysteries myths fairy tales oh that stuff really cool. I want to see science fiction my two favorite subjects This is also very well written by talented writer. Kudos to you hope you're having a five year old night and I look forward to your next submission thank you!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is a lovely gorgeous poem and I think the pictures pretty cool too!
It's fun to write about You're right about fanciful things Mysteries myths fairy tales oh that stuff really cool. I want to see science fiction my two favorite subjects This is also very well written by talented writer. Kudos to you hope you're having a five year old night and I look forward to your next submission thank you!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your marvelous review. I appreciate your taking time to read about Bigfoot and the fairies. Elaine
Comment from Mintybee
Hmm, Bigfoot finds a mythological creature. That's a switch! This poem was whimsical and light-hearted. It was a fun read. I like how you describe the scene and events simply, but vividly, like "he is awed/ by the minute/ beings with wings."
Mintybee
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hmm, Bigfoot finds a mythological creature. That's a switch! This poem was whimsical and light-hearted. It was a fun read. I like how you describe the scene and events simply, but vividly, like "he is awed/ by the minute/ beings with wings."
Mintybee
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much.Elaine
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Elaine,
There's a lot we don't know about our planet. About 71% of the earth's surface is covered by water. What's down there... besides aliens? And Bigfoot? How do those guys stay hidden? I've heard they use caves that we've never discovered yet, and they can travel passageways for hundreds of miles. Now fairies... I've seen them flying around at night with the fireflies. We used to hunt for them when we were kids. We called them pixies back in the day. Leprechauns? My granddaughter is 9 years old, and fully believes in them. She also watches for the tooth fairy, and Santa and his reindeer. I'm a little more down to earth. I search for Extraterrestrial Life! You know ... ET and his friends!
I enjoyed your poem of fantasy. The artwork as well is stunning.
"the giant primate
shakes his head
one lands on his hand,
there is more to his
world than he knows" ... You said it!
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hi Elaine,
There's a lot we don't know about our planet. About 71% of the earth's surface is covered by water. What's down there... besides aliens? And Bigfoot? How do those guys stay hidden? I've heard they use caves that we've never discovered yet, and they can travel passageways for hundreds of miles. Now fairies... I've seen them flying around at night with the fireflies. We used to hunt for them when we were kids. We called them pixies back in the day. Leprechauns? My granddaughter is 9 years old, and fully believes in them. She also watches for the tooth fairy, and Santa and his reindeer. I'm a little more down to earth. I search for Extraterrestrial Life! You know ... ET and his friends!
I enjoyed your poem of fantasy. The artwork as well is stunning.
"the giant primate
shakes his head
one lands on his hand,
there is more to his
world than he knows" ... You said it!
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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My late husband believed in UFOs and watched all the Tv programs about them. Congrats on your fairy experience, we all need some fantasy in our lives. Thanks for reading and review. Elaine
Comment from PoemsOfDD
I like this short story poem on tiny fairies and bigfoot adventures. Almost like a hallucination for the big ape. Tiny people and little fairies probably did exist eons ago but their habitat and mystical circles would have got destroyed along the way - as did our belief in them. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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I like this short story poem on tiny fairies and bigfoot adventures. Almost like a hallucination for the big ape. Tiny people and little fairies probably did exist eons ago but their habitat and mystical circles would have got destroyed along the way - as did our belief in them. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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You have me laughing here, I suppose Bigfoot could be hallucinating. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Sanku
I liked the fantasy and the imagination in this poem. Big foot meeting the fairies! They were hiding all these days among flowers.The last two lines are brilliant .It applies to every reader too.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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I liked the fantasy and the imagination in this poem. Big foot meeting the fairies! They were hiding all these days among flowers.The last two lines are brilliant .It applies to every reader too.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your encouraging words. Elaine
Comment from Caitriona
Very literal fantasy poem. I like the detail about the fairies and his realization of his surroundings. The elaboration on the environment on what he may be thinking is insightful. Maybe change "is he losing his mind" to he thinks for a second he has lost his mind... to keep us in the amazing moment of his thoughts. Great work and creative!
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Very literal fantasy poem. I like the detail about the fairies and his realization of his surroundings. The elaboration on the environment on what he may be thinking is insightful. Maybe change "is he losing his mind" to he thinks for a second he has lost his mind... to keep us in the amazing moment of his thoughts. Great work and creative!
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much. Elaine
Comment from JT traveller
What a lovely thought that a Yeti can have his very own fairies. It spurs the hope that we too have magical, fantastical entities looking out for us and hopefully making our wishes come true. A joy to read. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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What a lovely thought that a Yeti can have his very own fairies. It spurs the hope that we too have magical, fantastical entities looking out for us and hopefully making our wishes come true. A joy to read. Jacqueline
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you. Elaine
Comment from royowen
I suppose because the yeti or Bigfoot is a mythical creature, as is the Loch Ness monster and fairies, I think that this is a perfect poem to perceive that, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I suppose because the yeti or Bigfoot is a mythical creature, as is the Loch Ness monster and fairies, I think that this is a perfect poem to perceive that, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thank you. Elaine
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Thank you Elaine
Comment from Aussie
Don't understand, I download all the time? Your computer is probably DOS! What program are you running? I use Chrome. Well, this is a very different subject from under the sea. I loved it, keep on writing like this, maybe you would do well writing for children?
Hugs, Kay xx
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Don't understand, I download all the time? Your computer is probably DOS! What program are you running? I use Chrome. Well, this is a very different subject from under the sea. I loved it, keep on writing like this, maybe you would do well writing for children?
Hugs, Kay xx
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thanks for reading about Bigfoot. Thanks again for the generous amount of stars. Elaine
Comment from judiverse
Bigfoot would attract anyone's attention. It's interesting he has not noticed the fairies before. Maybe the wildflowers hid them. Maybe they didn't want to be seen. I don't think you need who in the second line. A larger font size would help. judi
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Bigfoot would attract anyone's attention. It's interesting he has not noticed the fairies before. Maybe the wildflowers hid them. Maybe they didn't want to be seen. I don't think you need who in the second line. A larger font size would help. judi
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I keep trying to increase the font size every time I write, usually with no effect and i do not know why it does not happen. I use advance editor. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
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You're very welcome. I don't know why you're having trouble with font size, if you're using Advanced Editor. Maybe you should ask Tom. judi
