One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Choka Poem - very nice picture presentation - very creative colors used in the text- cool- poem flows well and is very descriptive with an abundance of metaphors to describe all the feeling the your person was experiencing - not sure about the syllable count, sure it fine..I got lost. A common occurrence these days. lol. Take care AP
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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I like your Choka Poem - very nice picture presentation - very creative colors used in the text- cool- poem flows well and is very descriptive with an abundance of metaphors to describe all the feeling the your person was experiencing - not sure about the syllable count, sure it fine..I got lost. A common occurrence these days. lol. Take care AP
Comment Written 12-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from JT traveller
Romantic, engaging, alluring words. Another beautiful poem filled with love, lust and desire. A dreamy write. Thanks again for sharing your wonderful work. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Romantic, engaging, alluring words. Another beautiful poem filled with love, lust and desire. A dreamy write. Thanks again for sharing your wonderful work. Jacqueline
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from aryr
What a beautiful choka, Gypsy. The picture was great, even fantastic. I loved your words, they set the pace of your words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful choka, Gypsy. The picture was great, even fantastic. I loved your words, they set the pace of your words. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
'makes my unruly heart run' - I love the idea of an unruly heart. I never thought of it like that before. Can I use it that line in a romance novel? I think it's a perfect way to describe a certain heart in a certain novel I am writing right now, not posting, just writing. I'll post this novel after I finish posting the one, I am posting.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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'makes my unruly heart run' - I love the idea of an unruly heart. I never thought of it like that before. Can I use it that line in a romance novel? I think it's a perfect way to describe a certain heart in a certain novel I am writing right now, not posting, just writing. I'll post this novel after I finish posting the one, I am posting.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Of course! You may use that phrase. Thet happens to me sometimes.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, I like this one Gypsy. The theme and the talented choice of words really carried me away and I enjoyed the lovely trip upon lavender scented clouds. Great job!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Oh, I like this one Gypsy. The theme and the talented choice of words really carried me away and I enjoyed the lovely trip upon lavender scented clouds. Great job!!
Melissa
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written poem with effective nature imagery.
-The opening lines establish the premise.
-I like the transition to imagination and
personifying it, as well.
-Very good closing lines.
-Your images paint a vivid word picture.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written poem with effective nature imagery.
-The opening lines establish the premise.
-I like the transition to imagination and
personifying it, as well.
-Very good closing lines.
-Your images paint a vivid word picture.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from patcelaw
At the end of our day, I hope that we all have had such a good day that we could say that we feel like we want to dance beneath the light of the moon. This is a lovely presentation. Patricia.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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At the end of our day, I hope that we all have had such a good day that we could say that we feel like we want to dance beneath the light of the moon. This is a lovely presentation. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like this romantic poem. They dances under the peeking moon. I also like the alliteration in the penultimate line. The presentation is great. You are so good at the multi-color lines.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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I like this romantic poem. They dances under the peeking moon. I also like the alliteration in the penultimate line. The presentation is great. You are so good at the multi-color lines.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi,
It is always such a pleasure to read your fine poetry.
I applaud you for a beautiful presentation every time .
Your poetry is magic.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Hi,
It is always such a pleasure to read your fine poetry.
I applaud you for a beautiful presentation every time .
Your poetry is magic.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a beautifully stated Choka poem. The text is a great size and I love the various colors you used. It makes for a stunning presentation. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. Love the personification with the running unruly heart and the line of alliteration} day's dying dusk. The visual fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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This is a beautifully stated Choka poem. The text is a great size and I love the various colors you used. It makes for a stunning presentation. The message is stated with clarity and is easy to understand. Love the personification with the running unruly heart and the line of alliteration} day's dying dusk. The visual fits perfectly. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
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Ms Sandy
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Happy weekend.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome. Wishing you also a good weekend.
