One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Somonka poem-so many types - had no idea there are so many- this seems challenging! Good picture presentation and flow - good word count- Good Job AP
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I like your Somonka poem-so many types - had no idea there are so many- this seems challenging! Good picture presentation and flow - good word count- Good Job AP
Comment Written 27-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
An interesting form used so perfectly to adhere to the stated guidelines.
Simple yet appropriate image used.
Quite effective use of black and white colours.
A pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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An interesting form used so perfectly to adhere to the stated guidelines.
Simple yet appropriate image used.
Quite effective use of black and white colours.
A pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Blessings and hugs, Shirley. (*÷*)
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
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You're welcome
Comment from w.j.debi
You create evocative images with your verse, proving that it doesn't take many words, just well-chosen and arranged words, to get the message across.
Thank you for the links to learn more.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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You create evocative images with your verse, proving that it doesn't take many words, just well-chosen and arranged words, to get the message across.
Thank you for the links to learn more.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Debi
Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very sensual, yet innocent poem. I like that. I also liked the metaphor for the emotions and the sea. This is once, again, a complete package. Thank you for sharing it with us.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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This is a very sensual, yet innocent poem. I like that. I also liked the metaphor for the emotions and the sea. This is once, again, a complete package. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Barbara
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from Ulla
Wow Marival, this is such a sensual and very visual poem. I really like the form, but I will have to wait before joining the club. I have so much building work going on, falling behind with everything. I want to write and I'm also catching up with reviews and answering my reviews. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Wow Marival, this is such a sensual and very visual poem. I really like the form, but I will have to wait before joining the club. I have so much building work going on, falling behind with everything. I want to write and I'm also catching up with reviews and answering my reviews. Un abrazo, Ulla xx
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Hola, Ulla,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Marival
Comment from royowen
You're writing a lot more of these slightly longer poems than before Gypsy, and venturing into other areas of longer works with more language content thst before, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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You're writing a lot more of these slightly longer poems than before Gypsy, and venturing into other areas of longer works with more language content thst before, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Roy
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
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Most welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This somonko poem, Crest and Trough Waves, has the proper formatting and moves from the observation to the metaphorical relationship between two consenting adults.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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This somonko poem, Crest and Trough Waves, has the proper formatting and moves from the observation to the metaphorical relationship between two consenting adults.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You captured a sense of sexual connection between these lovers lying on the sand here with those waves of emotion and hands moving gently over sand dunes and plains, very provocative and sensual, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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You captured a sense of sexual connection between these lovers lying on the sand here with those waves of emotion and hands moving gently over sand dunes and plains, very provocative and sensual, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2023
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Dolly
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs ❤️
Comment from lyenochka
You definitely captured the longing and passionate feelings of these lovers at the beach. I always liked your blue eye reference because I remember that you have blue eyes!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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You definitely captured the longing and passionate feelings of these lovers at the beach. I always liked your blue eye reference because I remember that you have blue eyes!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Yes, my eyes are the only part of me I like. Specially when I was younger, i had beautifuleyes. The only time I liked myself is when I was married to Robert. I always tried to look good for him. I know it's a horrible thing to not like oneself. I probably need therapy. Sorry I regressed.
Thank you for reading my poem. This kind of poem is supposed to be romantic. I changed it to add a sexsual content warning. I always forget because I don't think it's offensive.
Love ya,
Marival ❤️
Comment from patcelaw
Gypsy, this is very low percentage on the wording is absolutely perfect for the photograph that you have used. I wish you the very best for the weekend.
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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Gypsy, this is very low percentage on the wording is absolutely perfect for the photograph that you have used. I wish you the very best for the weekend.
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Comment Written 25-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2023
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Have a wonderful weekend too, Patricia. Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem and for the kind words and the excellent five stars review.
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You are most welcome.