One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Cherish Adams
Gypsy, very nice. I have come to appreciate the Haiku. It's short and sweet (not trying to be cliche). I appreciate the beautiful message - especially the part that is left unsaid. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Gypsy, very nice. I have come to appreciate the Haiku. It's short and sweet (not trying to be cliche). I appreciate the beautiful message - especially the part that is left unsaid. Well done.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Cherish,
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Haiku poem- nice picture presentation- wind across the waves- poem conveys to me - the old saying "ashes to ashes... the temporal nature of existence and that the body is only an earth suit we wear for a time- not who we are- good job AP
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I like your Haiku poem- nice picture presentation- wind across the waves- poem conveys to me - the old saying "ashes to ashes... the temporal nature of existence and that the body is only an earth suit we wear for a time- not who we are- good job AP
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from kahpot
What a sad though beautiful haiku, I tipped my father's ashes over the side of his boat at his favorite fishing spot, an excellent read, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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What a sad though beautiful haiku, I tipped my father's ashes over the side of his boat at his favorite fishing spot, an excellent read, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Brandon Clark
Excellent expression with so few words. There is nothing I can see to make it better. The whole presentation (Image, font colors, and background) look excellent as well! Every word was chosen perfectly for this!
Great job!
Brandon
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Excellent expression with so few words. There is nothing I can see to make it better. The whole presentation (Image, font colors, and background) look excellent as well! Every word was chosen perfectly for this!
Great job!
Brandon
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from mermaids
I like the image of the sea in your words. Your haiku form paints a picture of nature that comforts the reader as she imagines one's ashes riding the sea of life. Excellent use of words.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I like the image of the sea in your words. Your haiku form paints a picture of nature that comforts the reader as she imagines one's ashes riding the sea of life. Excellent use of words.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am pretty sure the ashes would float in the wind over the sea of life. I really like that image. Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. It flows nicely and gives us good imagery.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I am pretty sure the ashes would float in the wind over the sea of life. I really like that image. Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. It flows nicely and gives us good imagery.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a stunning modern haiku. There is a feeling of release and freedom from death as ashes ride over an ocean teeming with life.
Very well-written and presented.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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This is a stunning modern haiku. There is a feeling of release and freedom from death as ashes ride over an ocean teeming with life.
Very well-written and presented.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Thank you so much for writing this meaningful poem. Many do have their ashes spread over the rippling seas. It is no secret what God can do, with arms wide open he will forgive each us, too. Like your poem.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you so much for writing this meaningful poem. Many do have their ashes spread over the rippling seas. It is no secret what God can do, with arms wide open he will forgive each us, too. Like your poem.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from patcelaw
Your faith, this haiku is very well written with a powerful message. I do wish you the best and all that you do. I also wish you the best of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Your faith, this haiku is very well written with a powerful message. I do wish you the best and all that you do. I also wish you the best of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I found your succinct poem well-penned, and it made me think what I want to happen to me when I die. First my ashes will wait patiently on the piano, for my soulmate to join me. Then it is together we will mingle once again enfolding each other as we rise to take our final gallop through the stormy sky, writing on the ether as we go. kay
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I found your succinct poem well-penned, and it made me think what I want to happen to me when I die. First my ashes will wait patiently on the piano, for my soulmate to join me. Then it is together we will mingle once again enfolding each other as we rise to take our final gallop through the stormy sky, writing on the ether as we go. kay
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I like your vision of what will happen when you die. It's a beatiful thought to mingle with your soul mate.
Thank you very much. I appreciate your time and kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs